Dear teacher Joyce, Thank you for your advice. I got a good opportunity to learn several alternative sentences. In addition, your warm words has encouraged me a lot. I appreciate your help very much. Sincerely, Yokoichi
Thank you for your correct and encouragement for me. I really appreciate your alternative. I can learn a lot from it.
Your writing is so inspiring. I always end up with my usual way of English writing, which I want to change. Thank you!
Thank you very much for your precise correct!
Thank you for correcting my sentences. Alternative sentences you wrote for me are helpful for my learning. Thanks in advance!
Hello, Joyce! I just want to express how I'm impressed with your comments, corrections and explanations which you gave me above. Your clear explanations helped me a lot to understand this assignment. The alternative sentences also help me very much. I'll try to read aloud the corrected sentences and alternatives in order to inprove my English skills! Thank you again Joyce! Will be in contact soon, Ai6
Dear Joyce, Thank you for your quick response and helpful advises. It was my second time to use IDIY but i could've learned a lot from just a few sentences. I realize that my weakness about writing is constructing sentences. It is not just a English problem but it also depends on cultural I should learn how can I build the attractive sentences so that I can use it as PR in the company. Again, I appreciate your support. I wold be happy to show my work soon. Best wishes, Momoko
Thank you very much
Hi Joyce You made the sentence more positive and simpler. The plural first person pronoun(we,our,us,ours) is a efficient tool to express teamwork. It naturally asks for commitment for the team and shares the goals with members. I need to learn more about how to use punctuation marks because it's totally different from Japanese. Indirect question is convenient but makes the sentence long and cumbersome. It can give the reader some stress on reading. Thank you for quick reply and giving me other word choices. It is a big help for me to enhance vocabulary and makes my English more natural. Have a nice day!
Hi Joyce Thank you very much for the review. "Kiss Kick Kiss" is well said. We need to be frank and polite at the same time to have good relationships with others. I thought period is always added to the abbreviated word. But I looked up and found it isn't always the case. The period in the "If" sentence which you pointed out was just my typo. I need to be careful when using "You have something." . "There is a question." can be "You have a question.”. But obviously, as you pointed out, "There is something unclear." cannot be "You have something unclear". It isn't always interchangeable. Thank you again for your kindness. Sorry for belated reply. I've been so busy this weekdays. I leave my current work place next week so I have to finish the current tasks or list up the leftovers so that others can take over. Instead, I'm going to spend time on studying English this weekend. Have a nice weekend :)
Dear teacher Thank you for corrections. I could understand your corrections, and learn to write English sentence well. Additionally, you encourage me. Thank you very much. Sincerely Masayoshi Oguri
Thank you for your good advices. I learned a lot of things.
Thank you very much.
Thank you.
Dear Joyce, Thank you very much for your correction with clear explanations. It is also helpful the alternatives and the answers to my questions. I will try to use the suggestions in my job and improve my writing skill. Thank you again for your support. Have a nice weekend!! Kind regards, Makiko
