Joyce's writing tips and alternative are very helpful to me. Thank you a lot. I want to get Eiken Grade1: widely recognized English language test in Japan. The test consists of reading, listening, speaking, writing test. The grade1 is the highly respected qualification in Japan and the grade is helpful about job. The writing test is similar to IELTS writing test, I think. I'll try to keep writing here as much as possible.
Dear Ms. Joyce, I'm appreciated your detailed explanation and some extra sentences. I could understand well. I'll continue my writing with paying attention to singular, plural, and third person. With regard, marunco
Thank you for your kind correction !
Thank you for your alternative.
YaY! No Corrections! And Thank you for your Alternative!
Thank you for always giving me good advice!
thank you for the alternative
Thank you. You are right. One of the reasons I study is to take an English test in the future. Though I have not decided when I take a test. However, I will keep my effort until then. Shinichi,
Dear Joyce, You showed simplest natural alternative and complex vocabulary alternative, that helps me a lot. Thank you for your advice. Regards, Naka
Thank you for your proper instructions! :) There are some grammatical terms that I don't know, but I would like to understand how to use. I'm curious about these terms and new knowledge regardless of any languages.
Thank you very much for your corrections. Actually, although I do not apply for a exam, I think that I would take a Eiken 1st grade in the future.
thank you for the writing tip
Thank you, again. I love your feedback and alternative writings. This is my third time's request, and I can see your comment filled with professionally oriented perspectives as well as considerate notes for a EFL learner. I can learn a lot from your alternative.
Well, once again, I would like to express my deepest gratitude and admiration for your detailed feedback and heartfelt comments once again. Especially, your alternative suggestions are of great help as well as highly suggestive to improve my writing skill. I'll reconsider my writing according to your feedback.
Dear Joyce, The yoga happened in the past, and the outcome of it, not changing your body, is certain (it definitely has not happened) so the past tense verb "did not" or "didn't" fits better in the past tense, than the uncertain "could not" verb. Use 'did' if it definitely did happen. The above explanation is very clearly for me. Regard, Mia
