Thank you.
Hi Joyce, Thank you for revising my writing and offering many optional sentences! I always hope that I will be able to write as if you have done. Many thanks as always, Kaori
Thank you very much.
Thank you for correcting my English. Additional natural alternatives were also helpful me. I haven't use :- punctuation and I don't know how to use it very well. It was fresh for me. I'll continue to study English. Thank you!