Thank you for your detailed feedback! Your comments were very helpful since they include "why this is good/bad" and a lot of alternatives to say.
Wow! I'm so glad that you remember our visiting. We can only see cute possum family on pictures, but they always make me happy :D My younger son still love a platypus doll that we bought at Healesville Sanctuary. Anyway, thanks as always. See you soon.
Sorry for my late response. I'm happy that you are well. "to toss and turn" is an expression that I was taught by IDIY teacher! Using phrases is essential to improve my English! Thanks for your feedback!
Thank you very much for your corrections and suggestions. I'm surprised and impressed you knew the proper names of parrots-toucan, cockatoo, and ring-neck parrot. And also I'll learn from your alternatives. Im looking forward to do it again with you. Have a good weekend Aki
Hello Joyce, Thank you for correcting my errors and giving alternative phrases. It was really useful and I am happy to learn with you. By the way, I have been to Gold Coast and Sydney. It was awesome. I love Australia and “Warbles?” your national rugby team. See you again. All the best, Shiro
Dear Ms Joyce, Thank you very much for your really helpful feedback!! I do really appreciate you giving many tips and alternatives. I did learn so many useful expressions which were new to me. Thank you also for your answer to my questions. I understand them very well. Have a restful weekend!
I appreciate your kindness! Looking forward to it again next time. best wishes Aki
Thank you very much for correcting!
Thank you for your kind and helpful correction.
Thank you so much, Joyce! This is the first time to use IDIY. I didn't expect to have such a polite correction. You gave me more motivation in learning English.
Thank you so much
Thanks for encouraging me! Your comment is so kind. Please stay health. See you soon!
Thank you for making corrections. I reviewed my composition and read your advece. I appreciate you showing me many alternative way. I thought "Yes! I wanted to say that!" in my mind. Thanks again and see you next time.
Dear Ms Joyce, I really appreciate your suggestions and many useful alternative sentences!! Those sentences include new expressions and words to me, and helped me to broaden my vocabulary. Thank you very much!! Have a peaceful weekend!
Dear Ms Joyce, Thank you very much for your great feedback! Your suggestions and explanations were clear and meaningful, so I learned many writing tips. Please stay safe.