Thank you very much for writing different version of my sentences.
You are great! Thank you!
It is a excellent advice for me. I appreciate your pointing out to my mistakes and advice. They stimulate me work harder to write essay. By reading your advice, I can learn many things and review my mistakes. I think how to explain speaking and writing in English, it is different from literal translation in Japanese. That's why I need to get to used to using it by writing English continually. I will keep up everything. Best Regard, Aik
Thank you for the correction. You gave me great tips. I can study natural expressions a lot from just 121 words I submit. You told me that my english is easy to understand, which is really relief. However,as you see, it is not natural, so I will need to practice writing! Your advices were so helpful to review my sentences. I wish I can learn from you agai. Best wishes, Morinarika
Thanks for the nice tip. I really appreciate it.
Dear. Joyce Thank you for guiding me how to structure of writing this time. Your commentary were a concise and easy-to-understand. I was able to learn the following things, *As it is a hypothetical "if I could" type of topic, the 'would be" verb tense is the best one to use in all sentences. *Use "etc." when not using 'include, for example or such as." If there is a chance, please correct my writing. Best regards Hikki(momotea)
Thank you for your proofreading. I could learn a lot from it.
Hello teacher Joyce, Thank you for your helpful correction. Thanks to your checking up about Kobe meat, my sentences are well covered based on the information! It was impressive work and I too learned from you. I heard of the cattle beer and sake massage for Kobe meat. In Japan, there even is a song of Kobe cattles with the beer and massage. So I asked if it was true to the manager, who gave me a lot of knowledge about Kobe meat in the restaurant which was proud of only serving "champion Kobe cattles", the highest rank Kobe meat. According to him, the beer and the massage are actually done to raise "Matsuzaka" meat, other famous brand beef in Japan, not to Kobe meat. These treats are not major, but there surely exists some provider to do it... amazing :0 "but", he says, this kind of care makes the meat a little too much tender and fatty. I forgot writing a story in the restaurant! I'd like to entry soon, when you are available :D moet
Thank you teacher Joyce, I am pleased that there were not any mistakes in my sentences, but I found your alternative describing what I wanted to say more naturally. I like "workmate" more than "colleague", it feels friendly. "pass over the rainbow bridge" is thoughtful and beautiful when I don't want to use the direct word. "grief", "empathize"... they are the words I didn't come up with, althought I know... I hope that now they have been activated in my vocabulary. I learned "cope with", it sounds useful as the word I will use a lot :) Thank you again, moet
Thank you very much for your quick answer. I think your advices are quite useful for me. You are one of the my favorite teacher so I will continue asking you.
Hello teacher Joyce, I am spendng my summer holidays reviewing my old IDIY entries, writing down on a note the corrections and advices the teachers gave me. Some entries failed to let them know exactly what I wanted to say, and the installments look forlorn. Some entries are more lively than originals, given many good words. Thank you for your loving alternative today,too. "spot", "dear","guess what?", "expecting","glimpse","litter of kitten","human friends".. such many! :D I'll definitely use "furry feline friend" in conversation with my friends :) "Firework" is really unforgettable idea. with many thanks and respect moet
Thank you so much for your support. Your advices are very useful. I’ll continue studying English.
Thank you for your beautiful altertanative, it made me cry, and is worth hudreds stars.
Thank you for your very gentle comment.
Thank you very much! Thanks to you, I have learned a lot of natural phrases today!
