Thank you for your comments and giving me many ideas to improve my writing.
I'm so surprised to know this service gives me this great volume of learning. I wasn't so sure so I didn't write long sentence as a first try. But now I feel I'd like to be checked on my writing skills more. I'll try to write longer and more detailed sentence as you recommended me to try.
Thank you again for your advice. One thing to correct is that I'm Ms, not Mr : )
Dear Ms Nahariya,
Thank you very much for your wonderful and very interesting feedback!
Your example sentences were all attractive for me. They were funny but very helpful to understand grammar points and cultural aspects!!
I do appreciate your great help.
Thank you very much for your answer to my additional question too. Your stories involving a cultural reference gave me another great knowledge.