Thank you for your feedback and comments that help to identify where I can improve!
Thank you for your help.
Nagako
Thank you for your help.
Nagako
Thank you for your help.
Nagako
Teacher Maryanne san
It's very kind of you to take me as a serious student of English.
I'm glad to read this.
I'm surprised that my self-made phrase "the giving-benefit policy" makes sense. I see "cohesive" is essential for being recognizable to native speakers. One way to make setenses cohesive is using same words, but it's better to avoid repetition, This is the reason why I made this phrase on my own,
And the phrase"facing this issue head-on" was moved from "a car crashed head-on." I wasn't sure this combination was used between natives.
"Although "of" can indicate a source or origin, "for" can indicate purpose"
I get it,
"off point,"
This is exactly what I meant to say.
Best regards,
Thank you as always!
Thank you for your feedback and the tips about how to use intransitive correctly. It is really helpful!
Hi Maryanne,
Oh, thank you for correcting this part and for your comments. I'm so encouraged.
Many thanks,
Kaori
Hi Maryanne,
Thank you for checking this part. Wow! Perfect game. I'm very glad.
Many thanks,
Kaori
Thank you, what a nice compliment! I’d like to make my English sound as close to native speakers’ as possible. I am aiming higher! Thank you very much for your help.