Dear Sylvia, Thank you very much for your really helpful feedback as always! I learned a lot of ideas about how to make my writing more natural, especially your suggestions of discourse markers were so helpful. They are very context-dependent, and it's very difficult for me to find one that is suitable. Tres bon weekend, et prends soin de toi :)
Thank you for correcting my essay! Your comments were very helpful! Particularly, I realized how important it is to learn the way English words are combined.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned that there was no need to put the article "a" before "less appetite." According to your message, I learned the phrase "on the mend." I will use it in the future diary entries! Now, she has been almost completely recovered :) Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the expression "a bit of a fever." I will use it in the next chance. I will use more modifying words and introductory phrases to make the meaning of my sentences clearer. By the way, I feel better now because I took enough rest on weekends. Best regards.
Thank you for your detailed explanation. I am delighted in learning new grammar thing. Look forward to contacting you again. Have a good day.
Thank you for your correction and kind advice. It is helpful for me. And I enjoy reading your message. Thank you again.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned that the preposition "at" is needed when talking about the time such as "lunch time" and "7 o'clock." I will use the preposition correctly. According to the 3rd sentence, I learned that the word "only" implies a negative meaning. I will use it properly in the future diary entries. To work from home is comfortable because I can control time easily! Best regards.
Thank you very much for your correction and valuable advice. I will try to use introductory phrases from now on!
Thank you for your corrections and explanations! I'll review my sentences a lot.
Dear Ms Sylvia, Thank you very much for your really helpful feedback! Your corrections and suggestions are very detailed and practical, and so I feel I am able to use the new tips that you taught me in my future writing and at work tomorrow. I hope that the lovely spring weather in both our countries will last and heal our tiredness nicely. A bientot!
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 3red sentence, I learned the difference between "was/were able to" and "could." I will choose one of them carefully in my future diary entries. My daughter likes the swings besides the slides as you did :) Best regards.
Thank you very much.
Dear Ms Sylvia, I am glad to hear that you are well and also have the same thoughts about vaccination as I do. Thank you very much for your really helpful feedback as always. Yes, distinction of expressions in terms of a register is one of the big difficulties for me, so your suggestions are very important for me. Tres bon weekend!
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanation! According to the 1st sentence, I learned the phrase "as if." I will use it in the next challenge. According to the 3rd sentence, I learned that the word "huggy" is an adjective. I knew the phrase "to go from strength to strength" for the first time! It's a good phrase, and I will use it in my future diary entries! Best regards.
Thank you, Sylvia sensei! You’re one of my favorite teachers! I learned a lot from you again! I’m looking forward to your future feedback! Hikaru
