Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! The 3rd sentence you altered sounds great due to changing the subject into the mascot. I love this sentence. Even after returning home, my daughter sleeps with the mascot every night :) Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! I learned the expression 'have a blast.' I've heard about it but never used. We spent a lot of time in the pool and ocean, so we got suntan mainly on our faces, arms and feet! Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! We spent a lot of time in and around our hotel because it was so hot that it was hard for my children to walk outside for a long time. The hotel has various kinds of pools and activities, so we enjoyed enough there. However, we visited a shopping mall once. There were a lot of interesting souveniors and cuisine. My family except for my son enjoyed local food. When we left Guam, my daughter didn't want to leave. Our trip was so exciting for her! Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! I learned some new words and phrases such as 'itinerary' and 'feel rushed.' I've been back home. We enjoyed our trip so much though my son didn't sleep, and my wife and I had to hold him in our arms all the time in the airplane. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! I think that the English sentences I write are simple and monotonous. Your drastic change in the review are very helpful for me! I want to learn various ways of making sentences. I learned new word 'palpable' and how to use it in the 3rd sentence. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! She likes the new table. She draws pictures and studies on it. I bought a crib for her when she was an infant. The crib can be transformed into a table. Now that my son also doesn't need a crib, I transformed it into a table, which is her new table! Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! Yes, we were happy to see when our son walked for the first time! Even now, he can walk only a few steps, but he's steadily growing up! Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! I learned the expression 'be away for work.' I like the sentence you provided, 'she had a lovely conversation.' I can easily imagine their conversation from this expression. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! The alternative sentences you gave me were so useful for me! I learned many expressions in your comments such as 'stumble upon' and 'light up with joy.' I want to learn many ways to express my episode, so I'm glad even if you extensively modify my sentences. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! Children are very energetic! I didn't take exercise at all in the playland, but I was exhausted. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! I learned the expression 'have a blast doing.' Yes, we had a blast playing with cards! Your new life in Ecuador sounds great! Are there both a beach and a rainforest near your house? Wonderful! I like geckos. There must be many colorful geckos in the rainforest. I also know what the bird looks like. Beautiful? Has a wierd shape? So interesting! Best regards.
Thank you so much for your review! It was hot on that day, so she looked a littel uncomfortable while walking. However, she enjoyed talking with her friends! Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! I learned the expression 'see him walk' is better to use in this context than 'see him walking.' Yes, I think my son will walk soon! Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! I learned the word 'specimen' is countable. In the morning on that day, she wouldn't go on a field trip because she doesn't like walking. However, she actually enjoyed the field trip. I'm also happy to hear from her about her exciting experience. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! I learned that we usually use the expression "a stomachache." "My stomachache" means my unique stomachache. That's interesting. My daughter often wakes up at night when I'm not available. I'm planning to move to a new house, so now, I'm interested in a house itself. However, I know poeple living there is more important as you mentioned. Best regards.
