Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 3rd sentence, I learned the phrase "to play on the equipment." I will not forget to put the preposition "on." Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned I should have used the plural form "noodles" in this sentence. When I wrote this diary entry, we've already returned home. We enjoyed the trip, and our daughter wanted to travel again! Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned the phrase "on the balcony" was right to say in this sentence. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 3rd sentence, I will take into consideration the word order. Best regards.
Dear Susanna K, Thank you for working for my entry. I have to say that I'm sorry for not replying to your previous feedback. It was hard for me to answer your questions due to the lack of enough English ability. Anyway, It was pleased to enjoy reading your corrections and explanations. I hope to work with you again soon. Best regards, M-yoshiro
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! Did you travel to Nepal last weekend? Sounds great :) Our trip was also great! My daughter seemed to be satisfied with it. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 3rd sentence, I learned the expression "to keep rolling over and over." I will use it in the next chance. We visited Nasu, Tochigi prefecture where is next to Tokyo. It is cooler there than Tokyo, so Nasu is very popular in the summer :) Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! Sorry to be late of my reply. Until yesterday, I had taken a summer vacation and had been busy to play :) According to the 3rd sentence, I learned the phrasal verb "stay away." I will use it in the next chance. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! I learned some words such as "preschool" and "to leave work" in this diary entry. Your corrections and alternative sentences you provided are very useful for me. Best regards.
Thank you so much!
Dear Susanna K, Thank you for working for my entry. I was pleased to learn from you again. Your suggestions are helpful for me to improve my English. I'll practice to use your suggestions naturally. I hope to work with you again soon. Best regards, M-yoshiro
I appreciate your thoughtful message. I am studying English because of my work, but basically, English gives me a lot of pleasure! Studying English makes me aware of new ways of thinking and new perspectives. Other than that, I feel I am more positive when I am thinking in English. It has motivated me for a long time.
Thank you for the helpful corrections!
Thank you for your advice! I appreciate you mentioned how I can make sentences more natural.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! I write diary entries almost every day. I will send my entries to you if possible! Best regards.
