Hello, Carolyn. How are you? It's nice to see you here. Thank you for the corrections you made on my essay, and I'm so happy to read your nice messages. I always try to use words, expressions, and grammars that are not familiar to me. This time, I'm glad that many of them were OK, especially, I'm happy with 'break down racial prejudice.' You introduced a good word, 'wary'. I'm sorry to say, but I thought the word was wrong, as it spells similar and also sounds similar to 'worry', and I don't distinguish the sounds of two words. Hoping to see you soon again. Kind regards. Yoko
Dear Carolyn, Thank you for your corrections and comments. I particularly didn't have confidence about how I use articles and descriptions of human gestures, so I appreciate your suggestions. Have a great day. Best regards, Kohei
Hello Carolyn Thank you for the corrections and the nice comments you made on my essay. In the 3rd sentence, I remember I received advice that negative word, like "not" , should be placed at a beginning of sentence. In the 5th sentence, the sentence you wrote to replace mine sound good! I like it. The last sentence, I still don't understand the difference of meaning between"would" and "could" Maybe,,,, I hope I will understand someday. Hope to see you soon. Yoko
Hi Carolyn, Thanks for asking. I am pretty good. Getting a feedback from native speakers like you is really helpful to make my writings in English more natural and fluent. Thanks for your work.
Thank you for the correction. I appreciate it.
Hello Ms. Carolyn, The alternative sentences you suggested were very helpful for me. Thank you for your gracious advice!
Thank you!!
Dear Carolyn Thank you for checking my writing. I'm glad to hear you like tofu too. I also like frozen-dried tofu, which is called koya-dofu in Japanese. Have you tried it? If not, please try it. It tastes different from tofu, but it's delicious! I always look forward to your checking my writings. With kind regards, Sisi
Very helpful corrections and alternatives! I've learned a lot. Thank you :D
Thank you verymuch!
Thank you for your correcting and warm message. Your detailed explanations are very helpful. Thank you very much.
THank you for your feedback and corrections. This exercise is a realistic one, and I will use these wordings next time. Tomoo
Thanks for your correcting! I like a phrase you gave 'she is nowhere in sight' and want to use this in other exercises. I'll keep you posted. Best regards;)
Thank you for helping me with English writing. I will use the word "labour shortage" at another time. I try to improve my English writing skill.
Thank you for the corrections!
