Dear Carolyn san, Thank you for your polite corrections. I read your advices carefully. I am so happy because I learned many natural English phrases! And I am moved to read using "○○ san". I appreciate your kindness. Kind regards, Misa
Thank you for your kind advice again! This lesson was a very good training.
Thank you for correcting my English!
Thank you very much !
Thank you for the prompt reply to my additional question. Alternative sentences you gave me are very helpful in improving my English. I love the phrase "something mystical is about to happen"!
Thank you for your corrections.I learned a lot.I hope to have you teach me again in the near future.
Thank you for your detailed feedback which is really helpful. Articles are a major problem for me to overcome in writing as you say. I have to keep up practicing, until finally being used to dealing with them comfortably. Thank you, Daisuke
Thank you for your detailed feedback which is really helpful. Articles are a major problem for me to overcome in writing as you say. I have to keep up practicing, until finally being used to dealing with them comfortably. Thank you, Daisuke
Hello teacher Carolyn, I really appreciate a lot of illuminating advice. Eglish composition eliminating the shadow of Japanese structure is my final goal. BUT it is a tough challenge actually... Thank you so much today! Best regards, Ryoko
I'm glad that my email got more thoughtful and clearer after your correction. However, the comments on sentence 3 are a bit difficult for me to understand, as some amendments weren't mentioned. I guess they weren't necessarily required or were needed to achieve harmony with the other changes. The explanation as to why the present perfect tense is preferable in sentence 4 is very convincing. I hope to work with you again in future. Best Regards
Hi, Thank you for your helpful feedback. You came to Japan. I think you visited at the perfect moment! You might have been hit by a tyhoon if you had visited just a couple of weeks later. I am really happy to hear you have a great time in Japan:)
Thank you very much for your great work!
Thank you so much for your correction!
Thank you very much!
Dear Ms. Carolyn, Thank you very much for your kind suggestions and comments. It keeps me motivated to write more! Have a joyful day! Kind regards, Rokuchan