Thank you very much! A lot of my faults are due to my carelessness. I have to be careful when I am writing. Your revise is very easy to understand. Regards. chorniy
Thank you for your correction and explanation about using "the".
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Thank you for the understandable correction. It helps me a lot.
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Thank you for your prompt reply!
I am very grateful for your advice and kindness. This was my first time to take such a lesson and It cheered me up very much. I'll keep studying English more.
hi there :) I'm happy to read your correspondence and I like the way you modify my diary. Thanks a lot :)
Dear Carolyn, Thank you for your wonderful support to my English writing. I also appreciate your suggestion how to prevent my drowsiness. I will try a small exercise after my lunch tomorrow. I'm looking forward to work with you. Take care and have a good day. Best regards, Yujin
Thank you teacher Crolyn. The correction was really instructive and helpful. I hope see you again soon. Sincerely, Masayoshi Muto
Dear Carolyn, Thank you for your collection. To tell the truth, this theme is so difficult for me that I reserched a lot. I intended to describe that most of abolished schools are located in countrysides where aging population and lower birthrate are serious. We have a lot of choices to reuse abolished schools in urban areas, and how to reuse them in countrysides are challenging. Wherever the abolished schools are locatede in countrysides or urban areas, we need to pay money to reinforce the schools to prepare for the earthquake. The investment for earthquake-resistant is the bottleneck in countryside. Best regards, Satoshi.
Dear Carolyn, Thank you for your eddition. I'm encouraged a lot. Have a nice day. Best regards, Satoshi.
