Hi Carolyn, Happy Friday! Thank you for your feedback! I'm feeling that I'm improving a bit. Regarding the second paragraph 2), There's a law when the female member of the Japanese Royal family get married, their status becomes a normal citizen. So they won't be allowed to attend any event as a member of the imperial family. Such a silly law! Thanks again. Have a lovely weekend! Kat
Dear Carolyn sensei, Thank you for reading my sentences. Sorry for this late reply. Your comments are understandable. Next time I will write being careful, so that I don't make spelling misses. See you soon. Gluecklich
Hi Carolyn, Thank you for your feedback. It's really clear to me. Yes, my son's school doesn't allow kids to bring eggs, fish and honey (!) for their snacks and lunch, as well. It's still hard work to get rid of these foods when I make riceballs for him. Articles are a cause of headache... I will check google later. Thank you for letting me know! I will send through another essay tonight or first thing tomorrow morning. Thank you again for your time. Kind regards, Kat
Hi Carolyn, Thank you for your feedback. I will check the books which you picked for me. Thanks again! Kat
Dear Caloryn sensei, Thank you for reading my essay. I am pleased and motivated that you gave me very positive comments. I will ask you to check my essay again.
I greatly appreciated your reply and learned a lot as always. Thank you. Best wishes,
Thank you!
Thank you for your kind correction and telling me how to use the word "success". I understood it well.
Thank you for your kind correction. You said that morning sickness will pass in time. These words encouraged me. I will keep trying English composition.
Thank you very much for your corrections and explanations. I found them really convincing and helpful. It would be great if you keep on doing sincere work.
I greatly appreciated your quick reply and learned a lot as always. Your comment will help me to grow in confidence. Thank you.
Hello Carolyn, Thanks for your correction and rephrasing. I learnt new words a lot and next time will do better work.
Thank you!
Thank you very much for your corrections!
Dear Carolyn. Thank you for correcting my diary. It was very exciting for me to receive your reply.
