Carolyn-san, Thank you very much for your suggestions!
Thank you so much for the quick reply. It was the first time for me to use this system, and I sent a simple diary. It was fun reading the feedback and I’d like to try something more to keep up my English writing!
Thank you for reading and checking my writing. I'm glad to read your reference to your dog. I'm enjoying the time with my dog. He can not be compared with travelling. There are many wonderful places in Japan. My dog is ten years old. I hope he lives long.
Dear teacher Carolyn Hello! Thank you so much for correcting my composition. I hope to see you next time again. Thank you and kind regards, Pasery
Dear Carolyn san, Very sorry for being late to reply you. While I continued to sumit my English phrases, I missed reviewing this work as well as to reply you. I appreciate for your corrections and clear explanations. Articles, numeration are my main themes to learn. I hope I can improve my skill step by step. Sincerely yours, Asouka
Dear Carolyn san. Thank you very much for correcting my sentences. This topic was difficult but interesting. I will keep writing to make my English more natural. Thank you, Yoko
Hello, Ms. Carolyn. Thank you very much for your corrections. It’ll rain this weekend in Japan, and I’m going to enjoy staying at home. I hope you’ll have a nice weekend! Isabel
Thank you for kind comment. Thnks to you my writing has become sophiscated.
Thank you for your kind comment on my writing and also your idea about the topic.
Thank you for your comments and corrections! It really helped me!
Thank you for your advice. I do understand how to use "the" and "a" according to cntext.
Thank you teacher Carolyn, I tried to discribe that the kitten was too cute, with first sentence, " ...cuteness is ovelading". It was not that we could not access the site because it was too popular. I refered to the sithe below; http://eikaiwa.dmm.com/uknow/questions/15295/ I learned that it needs attention to use the word "overload" when I see something too cute and it melts my heart :)
Dear teacher Carolyn I’m greatful to your advise. I’m very happy to be complimented by you! I became more motivated! Thank you. I’m looking forward to have you check my assignment next time again. Kind regards, Pasery
Thank you for your kind comment. You encouraged me a lot. I am relieved to know my writing is not so bad.
Thank you!
