Thank you for your detailed feedback. I learned many thing from your comments.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your kind advice and correction. I didn't know the format "the way Subject + Verb". As I have used this word in the wrong way many times until now, it is so helpful for me. I also learned that "whereas" is stronger than "while". I didn't know the difference. The story that most immigrants who really need to express themselves don't have fear on their mind was understandable. I will have up coming other English events soon, and I'm writing another composition. Have a great Sunday! Best regards, mkawa
Thank you, as always.
Thank you, as always.
Thank you for your review. I tend to focus on grammar in each sentence, but I learned it is also important to think about essay structure! I appreciate your advice from the new perspective:)
Thank you very much as always. The news about Ohtani is big concerns among Japanese fan. Surely, he might lose more than he thought. It is not wise to lean on uncertainty like gambling.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. I did my best today. I walked a lot and exhausted, so I think I will have a good sleep tonight as usual. Please have a wonderful night. Kind regards, wako38
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. I agree with you. IDIY offers great opportunity to learn English, and thanks for the chance to see you! I appreciate your good quality teaching. Kind regards, wako38
Thank you for the review! It is helpful to learn how to use articles correctly and how to effectively use ‘there~ ‘sentence :)
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your correction and kind advice! I learnt the importance of starting from background. The composition structure which you charged is really helpful. I learnt not only English but also common writing. I understood the difference between "made from" and "made of". I didn't know it so far. The number of patients is increasing now, and it is so scary. This news obviously can affect food and medical industry. I'll write another composition soon! Have a good week! Best regards, mkawa
Thank you for your help. It is what I would like you to do. Your correction makes me happy. I have just decided to take this IDIY course. See you next time. I've just made a notebook for IDIY.
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. Have a great day! Kind regards, wako38
Thank you for the quick replay and correcting my essay to be more natural and accurate! I will keep practicing:)
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. I don't really understand how to use prepositions. I’ll try to study it harder. Have a great day. Kind regards, wako38
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. It’s so cold today, and surprisingly it’s snowing here! I hope you have a great day. Kind regards, wako38
