Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for correcting my writing again. I’m going to read and memorize the writing that you amend for me. Today I’m at home with my daughter. She’s been at home since she broke her ankle. She participates online with elementary school classes. Have a great day! Kind regards, wako38
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. I agree with the norm "Children are cruel" because human is one of animals which have instinct. When citizens didn't have mandatory education, many of them tend to show thoughtless and impulsive behaviors as they prefer hedonic desires. However, as science has certified increase of frontal lobe, brains of human being are developed explicitly which raise consciousness, rational thoughts, and public morals to crave the peace. Therefore, school education is indispensable to foster students' worthwhile doing, motivation, and life goals to have these positive behaviors. Governments, teachers, and parents should tackle eradicating bullying and troubles among students to stop the students who don't go to school. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank your for proofreading my text. I am looking forward to taking your lesson again.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As for stopping by a clothing store or grocery store, silence by shop staff may be a high-quality customer service. When I visit there, I usually talk with them what I need and listen to their advices at first. When I don't need their suggestions, I always tell them that I just look around and may call them if I have questions. Is it a nuisance communication? Although some customers say having pressure by staff of the store, they don't have to be hesitate to mention they don't need help and suggestions because they are customers. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. I agree that the rich also board aviation companies' airplanes as ordinary peopla do. Their luxurious choice to own private jets should be prohibited to stop global warming. Governments should take actions to legislate private jets ban for environmental protection. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. As the internet free news websites has become common, fact-checking and neutrality againt issues are critical for readers to make appropriate decisions and judgements. Given the importance of correct information, paid news companies are essential to maintain for rational agrrement among citizens. As television companies are censored by third-party organizations, the internet news sites are also monitored whether they make misinformation or not to stop fake news. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Your writing is elegant and fun to read. I would like to make such sentences in my document. Thank you for meticulous overhaul. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I agree with the difficulty to expand diversity and tolerance among residents who regard themselves as the privileged citizens while requiring economic migrants. As our society believe that Japan is a homogenous society, some people refuse mixed blood of Japanese even Ms.Naomi Osaka and Mr. Rui Hachimura who are super-athletes in the world. Although they say they are Japanese, but an atmosphere of social norm segregate them from indigenous residents. Japanese immigration policy strictly regulates who can get working visa and relentlessly deports undocumented migrants when officers found them. Not only getting permission for entrance visas but also renewing are also difficult to achieve. There are two difficult prerequisites to satisfy request that are stipulated by the Japanese government. Applicants should have enough conversation skill and literacy in Japanese. Applicants should make contract with employers before they come to Japan. In addition, if economic migrants in Japan violate laws even minor offences, immigration authority may refuse renewing their working visa. As long as they want to stay in Japan as a worker, they have to maintain good deeds day and night. Despite their decent attitudes, it is common for Japanese residents to see them as a stranger, even if they stay for more than a decade. In case of Japan, diversity education should be taken to change the atmosphere of our society because they are essential for sustaining our society aging drastically. Best regards, 5971mak
Dear SaraRoseNY, Thank you for your kind advice and message. It encountered me a lot, so I can be positive and move forward. The tips you told me were really helpful. For example, "It was upsetting" is better than "I was upset, "damage brain cell" is better than "break brain cell", and "in any case" is better than "anyway". In addition, "go to one's head" is a new phrase to me. I hope you will have a good weekend. Best regards, mkawa
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. I am happy for you to have interests about "yukizuri" that is our local traditional scenery in winter. Previously, it was common from latter half of December to end of February, but the duration has become shotened gradually due to global warming. In the last winter, we can see it around the last week of the year and latter half of January only. As a result of climate change, we can have more sunny days and gloomy atmosphere clearly declines. On the other hand, we lose the amount of snow falling than before. Traditional winter scenes have become outdated, so I feel missing the time of snow falling winter days. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Price hike is familiar now and many citizens are afraid of further price inflations. Since Japanese people are not good at investing, they frequently put aside some money on their bank accounts. They believe that some amount of bank accountmoney is lifeline to survive. It is a reflection of their daily attitudes, which improve their lives step by step ahead of taking challenges with risky investment deals. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I think that a constitutional ban on e-cigarettes would not be understood by the public. A ban on vaping for those under 20 and a price hike of e-cigarettes are rational and would be supported by many people. I believe that a policy that encourages more people to live healthier voluntarily is a better option. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are useful to me. Since regular exercises help me be in good health, I do exercises everyday. Daily exercises has become one of daily routines and I enjoy exercising. While doing daily walking, it can energize me and give me a sense of refreshing. Best regards, 5971mak
