Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I reviewed your correction and want to brush up my English more. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback. As always, your detailed explanations were easy to follow, and the alternative sentences you offered me were very useful! I have written almost 1500 essays, but I need a lot of training to write essays that are both grammatically correct and sounding natural.
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for your feedback. You really polished my sentences!
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. In my view, the Japanese government should take strong leadership to stop the deterioration of concentration in Tokyo. As long as the government allow market principal of capitalism, the concentration of population in Tokyo continues worsening year after year. Such trend boosts current depopulation in remote areas and overpopulation in Tokyo. The economical gap results in social anxiety between the have and the have not. At the same time, abandoned their parents hometowns highly lead to collapse due to a lack of the young. Consequently, our society will fail to maintain sustainable development and increase crime rates after all if current conditions remain. To improve a national balance, it is indispensable for us to incentive like corporation tax cut and increase online transaction with relocating headquarters. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. I understand that I should have limited the usage of "will". The use of "will" is limited to cases where I intend to do something or when I am almost 100% certain that something will happen. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Yes, I regularly have interection with my groundson every weekends. While having a fun time, I regularly play with him at the nearby park and read to my grandchild. I do arts and crafts with my grandchildren with English child books. I want him to get used to English by exposing him to it from an early age. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Since social media platform has become common over children, many of them compete to get more reputition while showing beautiful outlook with beauty products. I think that the usage of skin care products is a negative influence of online communication. Parents and teachers should persuade children to stop beauty chemicals to protect their healthy growth. Best regards, 5971mak
Thank you for detailed feedback. I learned how to use some words like "preference".
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
Teacher SaraRoseNY Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak
