Thank you, as always.
Hello, Desiree, You'd never know how much I enjoy reading your texts. "Connotation" 'a feeling or an idea that a word makes you think of' In the beginning, I was thinking about some options of word, such as, images, ideas, stories, but "connotation" is the right and best word that means what I want to say. "I don't want "kin" chosen again" It's also impressive for me. I just follow rule of grammar that I can think of, and make the sentence. You made a wonderful change on it. I have to learn how to omit unnecessary words in a sentence so as to make it simple and clear. The below is a list of good and helpful expressions you gave me. I will be trying to use them before I forget. 'negative connotations, so I don't like it being chosen.' 'The symbol/character' 'money worship played a stronger role' 'I don't want "kin" chosen again.' Thank you so much, Desiree. Bye for now and see you next time. Yoko
Thank you for your useful feedback! I should be more careful when I will write from next time.
Hi, Desiree, hello again. Oh! that's funny. I forgot to answer the question. I came up with an idea and enjoyed writing them. Maybe, I didn't read the article so much. You gave me many impressive expressions, like 'in their later years', ' develop and suffer from....', 'feel abandoned'. Thank you. Yes, music has psychological effect on people, not a physical effect. I remember some songs which would always make me feel as if I were 18 years old when I broke my first love. You mentioned that you returned late, so, I need to say sorry for the delay of response as well. In the end of this message, I would like to say..... I feel so sorry to hear the loss of your first husband. 38 years old is too young. See you next time. Yoko
Hello, Disiree, How are you? Yes, that's right. Reading your sentences, I understand my writing should have been written concisely. I'm gonna remember this and try next time. Thank you. You make cheese! You have horses!( not a one) You really are person who lives in different cultures. In Japan, only some rich people can afford to own horses except horse business people. Take care and see you next time. Yoko
Thank you very much.
Hello, Desiree, How are you doing? I'm happy to hear from you again here. Thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. I'm happy to read your nice comments. Your corrections all make perfect sense to me, and I enjoyed reading the phrases you wrote as they were very interesting to me. "Voice" can be used as verb. You mentioned "Demeny voting", which means a voting by people who don't understand things because of dementia. That's right. That's a serious and sensitive problem. I don't find any good solution for that. I will see you the next time I come back to IDIY. take care until thgen. Kind regards, Yoko
Thank you, as always.
Thank you, as always.
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Thank you, as always.
Thank you, as always.
Thank you, as always.
Thank you, as always.
Thank you, as always.
