Thank you as always!
Dear Desiree, I'm sorry to hear about your husband. I'd like to express my condolences. The story is so sweet. Thank you for sharing it with me. As always, your amendments make perfect sense to me, thank you so much. I hope to see you soon again. Bye for now Yoko
Thank you for your correction and comments.
Thank you for correcting my sentence. I could get many important points for writting sentence shorter. I thought I must have a good command of English grammer. I'm thinking I want to ask a favor of Desiree tearcher again. I'll do my best for my goals.
Hello, Desiree. How have you been? Thank you for the amendments you made on my submission. Your nice messages make me happy as well. the explanation about the first sentence is perfect! You made me understand why. thank you so much. I appreciate your kind consideration as always. Hoping to see you soon again. Bye for now. Yoko
Thank you for correcting my sentences with useful comments. It shows me how I can make my writings simpler and more natural.
Dear Desiree Thank you for your kind feedback! Have a wonderful day!!
Dear Desiree, Thank you for your useful comments. I did not know about the average number of words of English sentences as I had thought that longer sentences look smarter.
Dear Desiree Thank you for your wonderful feedback! Have a lovely day!!
Dear Desiree Thank you for your kind message! Have a wonderful day!!
Dear Desiree Thank you for your useful explanation! Have a wonderful day!!
Dear Desiree Thank you for your nind feedback! Have a wonderful day!!
Hello, Desiree. How are you ? It's nice to see you here again, and thank you for the amendments you made on my essay. Also, you wrote me the explanations for the amendment on the expression, thank you. There was a shocking news last week. Ex prime minister Shinzo Abe was shot to death while he was making a speech on the street in Nara city. People blame the security guards who were supposed to protect him, because the killer shot him only three meters behind. It is interesting that many people say he was a nice person and a great prime minister, although they said about him differently before. Anyway, I can't believe such a terrible thing happened in my country. Stay safe in many ways Bye for now. Yoko
Dear Desiree Thank you for your kind feedback! Have a wonderful day!!
Dear Desiree, Thank you very much for correcting my sentences. They are really helpful to me. I look forward to learning more from you! Best regards, Sae
