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Thank you very much for your helpful amendments! I enjoyed the party!
Hello, Desiree. How are you doing? Thank you for the corrections and meaningful advice on my essay. I understand what you mean. I will try not to write the obvious, but probably that will be quite a challenge for me. When I write English, I need to aware of the difference between English and Japanese. In Japanese we often omit "the obvious", and sometime even a subject is not written in a sentence when it is obvious. As I thought English is different, I tend to add obvious information to make sure it makes sense. I think I need to read or listen English more to understand its natural flow and sound. Anyway, thank you for the advice, you are the first person who told that to me. Hoping to see you soon again, or otherwise, have a wonderful holiday. Yoko
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Thank you for your corrections. You’ve always been a great help.
Thank you very much for your helpful advice and warm message! I also wish you all a wonderful, peaceful year!
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Thank you very much for your help again! Your suggestion is so helpful for me.
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Thank you for your feedback with helpful comments. It is a realistic situation that game me a good practice experience. Tomoo
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Hi, Desiree. How are you? Thank you so much for the amendments and explanations attached to them. "excusably bad" in the 4th sentence is my mistake. I tried to write exactly what you said. I saw a picture of women’s beach handball players wearing the old uniform. I was upset and felt so sorry for them. I think that people of the federation are the most embarrassed by this story. Off course, they deserve it. Hoping to see you soon again. Yoko
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