Dear MrsB, Thanks for revising my essay. I learned important knowledge that 'it has advanced to some extent' is common English expression in my sentence. It was hard to express my idea this time because the topic was somewhat related to racial discrimination, and I do not know the actual situation in America, what is the general view of people in the US. Therefore, I am little concerned about if other countries' people would feel bad by reading my essay. Thanks a lot, and I hope you would revise my next essay again!! Best, Keigo
I reviewd my mistakes. Thank you!
Thank you very much for correcting my writing. Your suggestions are very helpful to me!
Thank you for your correction!
I understood my mistakes. Thank you.
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Thank you very much for correcting my English. Your explanation is very clear and motivated me to continue my study.
Thanks!
Thank you very much!
Thank you very much for correcting my writing, MrsB! Your explanations are easy to understand and help me a lot!
Hello Teacher MrsB. Thank you for your checking. I learned that how to say, go back home or go back. Thank you.
Thank you very much for detailed and helpful correction and comments! Especially I really appreciate the point that you told me that the sentence doesn't make sense, which I wouldn't want to do in school or in buisiness.
Thank you for your revise! How long your sentences is! I easily understood the explanation about 'a and the' and accounts for my wrong sentences.
Thank you for reading and understanding my short essay again!
Dear MrsB, Thank you very much for your quick response and instructive corrections. I found that I made minor errors a lot. I would like to be careful next. Sincerely, Taisuke
