Thank you for the collections and explanations!
Thank you for the collections and lots of advise regarding how to start an essay writing! The hardest part for me is always writing the first sentence of an introduction. I know it is better to start with hooks or paraphrasing questions but It is extremely hard since I don’t know how. The foolproof method is very interesting and I will try this if I stuck. I hope I can learn more writing methods from you in future.
Thank you for the corrections and answering my inquiry! It is interesting to know the fundamental of introduction and how important that is, in particular, the part some writers spend a month to prepare a decent introduction. Although I am practicing for IELTS writing exams and I have to write an introduction in a couple mins, I am sure these tips and examples will help me a lot.
Thank you for the collections with some useful key phrases! Some of words that you recommended are exactly what I was looking for but unable to find during writing. I am happy to know all of these.
Thank you for the collections! The use of colon and the need of replacing a pronoun are great tips! New vocabularies and phrases are always very helpful! With definite articles, it is irritating that I never get used to them. It is hard to memorize all the patterns and of course there are a lot of other patterns which I am not yet aware of. Hope I can use them all with no mistakes.
Thank you very much for corrections and explanations in a detail level! I tried to use a participial phrase in this topic but I guess I used it in the wrong way. I will try it again sometime soon.
Thank you for the corrections and answering to my question! I hope I can learn writing techniques more from you in future.
Thank you for the corrections! Your feedback includes plenty of new vocabulary and wording, which they are interesting and worthwhile to review.
Thank you for the corrections! I am always happy to read your comments.
Thank you for correcting my essay. The alternative expressions you taught me are what we non-native speakers cannot easily think of, so I have learned a lot!
Thank you for the collections with some useful vocabularies ! I could have avoided some mistakes I made..
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned the difference between "fall over" and "fall down." I will use each of them properly in my future diary entries. Also I learned that it is better to split one sentence into two if it contains two different thought. Best regards.
Thank you for the corrections. It is very interesting to learn new vocabulary!
Thank you for the corrections with lots of examples!
Thank you very much, Marielle sensei, for the detailed feedback and answering the follow up questions. Your rewrite is concise and powerful. This is such a productive learning opportunity. Again, thank you so much! Hikaru
