Thank you very much for editing my writing and answering all my questions! Very interesting tip that BECAUSE and AS are slightly different! I hope you have a wonderful Christmas Day!
Thank you for corrections and the example answer for comparing 1989 and 2019 lists. I wasn’t sure about how it should be compared so it is good to know!
Thank you for corrections! The edited writing is exactly what I wanted to say in regards to this topic but with my poor writing skill I could not deliver it naturally. I will try to learn a lot from your writing.
Thank you for your feedback and comments! Through this session, I found that I have a lot of things which need to be fixed in my writing, including things that I have already learnt in my previous writings but I couldn’t be able to (or forget to) implement them in Today’s writing. I totally agree with your idea about the economic inequality. In regards to the phrase ” I propose that” , I try to use them in my future writing I f I have a chance! Thank you!
Thank you for your feedback! I wrote my comment in the wrong place. Please ignore it!
Thank you for the corrections with some useful alternative sentences! I didn’t know how to use the countable version of the word”food” so it’s very helpful!
Thank you for the corrections! with “chose”to “choose”, I could have avoided this mistake…. With “ source” and”alternative” I was thinking about those but picked the wiring one. Hope I don’t make the same mistake again!
Thank you for your useful comments. I was deeply impressed. How wonderful it would be if I had started earlier IDIY and seen you. At any cost, I am determined to continue IDIY.
Thank you for your feedback! The variety of the alternative sentences helps me to expand my poor vocabulary!
Thank you for your feedback! I tend to forget to include the object of the sentence. I will be careful next time!
Thank you for the corrections! “ substantially raise”, “offset the cost” and “I propose…” are very useful expressions!
Thank you for the corrections and alternative sentences! It is good to know “food” can be a countable noun when we talk about varieties!
Thank you for the corrections! It is good to know the difference between “exclude” and “not include” !
Thank you for the correction! I am actually happy with learning British/Aussie English spelling :)
Thank you for the correction! I will be careful with the pronoun usage. I tend to make this mistake over and over again...
