Thank you for correcting my essay. I have learned a lot from the alternative expressions you showed me!
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I apologize for the late reply. I’m grateful for your excellent suggestions and detailed explanations. I think that it is a little challenging for me to “elevate” the text just like your alternative sentences, but I’ll continue to improve my English skills every day. I’m looking forward to taking your lesson again!
Thank you for corrections! I had been “as same as” quite a lot so it’s good to know that “the same as”should be used instead!
Thank you for the corrections! “Alongside” is a word I don’t rarely use so I will try to use it if I have a chance!
Thank you for corrections! I didn’t know the phrase “leaps and bounds” so it is good to know!
Thank you for corrections! “be operational“ and “relieving labor shortage” are useful phrases!
Thank you for corrections with some new vocabularies! We always hope that the government does some actions to contain the virus to avoid another wrecking havoc since our situation has been devastating.
Thank you very much for editing my writing and answering all my questions! Very interesting tip that BECAUSE and AS are slightly different! I hope you have a wonderful Christmas Day!
Thank you for corrections and the example answer for comparing 1989 and 2019 lists. I wasn’t sure about how it should be compared so it is good to know!
Thank you for corrections! The edited writing is exactly what I wanted to say in regards to this topic but with my poor writing skill I could not deliver it naturally. I will try to learn a lot from your writing.
Thank you for your feedback and comments! Through this session, I found that I have a lot of things which need to be fixed in my writing, including things that I have already learnt in my previous writings but I couldn’t be able to (or forget to) implement them in Today’s writing. I totally agree with your idea about the economic inequality. In regards to the phrase ” I propose that” , I try to use them in my future writing I f I have a chance! Thank you!
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Thank you for the corrections with some useful alternative sentences! I didn’t know how to use the countable version of the word”food” so it’s very helpful!
Thank you for the corrections! with “chose”to “choose”, I could have avoided this mistake…. With “ source” and”alternative” I was thinking about those but picked the wiring one. Hope I don’t make the same mistake again!
