Thank you for your encouraging feedback. The corrections you gave are quite helpful. Tomoo
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Dear Ms. Julia Vivian, Thank you so much for your revision. I am assured to hear the news that spreading the infection has become to be controlled little by little. Although we are afraid of the second hit of the outbreak, we have restarted the economic activities step by step. I hope that a vaccine or an anti-viral drug will be developed soon. I hope you and your family have a good time! Best wishes,
Dear Julia Vivian Thank you for reading and your kind response. I'm always happy to get your feedback. You motivate me a lot. Thank you so much again. Best, Yuki
Hi, Julia Vivian Thank you for reading my text as always! I was great that I didn't make a major grammar mistake. It is a pleasure learning English now, thank you for that. Best, Yuki
Dear Julia VIvian Thank you for improving my text. Your advise is understandable so I understood everything which you wrote. Thanks to you advise, I have done good study. I continue to learn English despite outing restrictions. I’m going to submit my text again. Have a nice day and take care! Yours sincerely Yatt
Dear Ms. Julia Vivian, Thank you so much for your revision and your comments. To tell you the truth, I have no idea about the castle shown in the picture. There are some famous castles in Japan. Some of them are designated as a world heritage or national treasures. I think the most famous Japanese castle is Himeji Castle, which is registered as a world heritage. It is a beautiful and giant castle, and has a long history. Other than that castle, some castles are famous and attract tourists. However, I can't figure out what castle is the one in the picture! If I find some information about the castle, I will let you know! It is so hot today here in Japan. Nevertheless, the streets are empty because of the restriction of going out. I hope we can get through this tragedy soon. I hope you enjoy your holiday too. Best wishes,
Dear Julia vivian Thank you for reading my diary as always. I'm so grateful that I can share my thought and get feedback. Take care and I hope to get your feedback again. Best, Yuki
Dear Teacher Ms. JuliaVivian, Thank you for your kind corrections. Many alternatives are very beneficial for me! I appreciate them. Also, I had never seen the word, "liaise". It is not found in my old dictionary, however, I found it my new dictionary, which I bought last year. I am happy to know new word. Best regards, Ms. Misa-Office
Your correction was very easy to understand. It was very helpful as you suggested many alternative sentences. Thank you.
Dear Ms. Julia Vivian, Thank you so much for your revision of my English compositions. In Japan, rice-planting takes place in the spring. Farmers are so busy in this season. Almost all the famres use the machine to cultivate rice nowadays. I think this picture shows a scene of a event of experiencing traditional rice planting. Best wishes,
Dear Ms. Julia Vivian,. Thank you very much for your revision for my English email. As it has been in England, the weather in Japan has also been getting warm. The number of the patients who are infected with the novel coronavirus has been declining in these two weeks. It seems that temparture and humidity have some effects to the power of spreading the virus. I hope the summer will sweep away the virus in the UK too. I hope you and your family take care of yourselves. Best wishes,
Dear Ms JuliaVivian, Thank you very much for your corrections and alternative sentences. Have a lovely day!
Dear Ms.Julia Vivian, Thank you for your feedback. I'm encouraged by your kind message.
Thank you for your kind corrections! Best regards,