Hi, Jullia Vivian Thank you for reading my text and kind response. Your feedback always motivates me a lot. I hope to work with you soon. Please stay safe. Best wishes, Yuki
Thank you for your attentive corrections. I think that the violent scenes of video games should not be seen by kids; however, we could not conclude easily as such scenes would accelerate the agressiveness of them. Best regards.
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Dear Julia, Thank you for your prompt review. Your continuous help would be highly appreciated. Best regards,
Hi, Julia Vivian Thank you your quick feedback! I'm very happy to work with you again. Thanks to your detailed advice and corrections, I could write in English better. I recommend that you watch the movie. It is an American movie so I think it's already available in your area. Have a great week and please stay safe. Best wishes, Yuki
Dear Julia Vivian, Thank you very much for your correction! Have you ever tried to use this method to control yourself? At first, I thought it was great that we could deceive both our own brains and feelings. Then I found out that it was very difficult to think "I did it very well," instead of "I'm tired." My heart doesn't allow me to think what is not true. I appreciate your help and kind message as always. Best regards, Ayako Nara
Dear Julia, Thank you very much for your prompt comment. Your continuous help would be highly appreciated. Best regards,
Dear Julia, Thank you very much for your prompt correction. Your suggestions are very helpful for me to improve my writing skill. Your continuous help would be highly appreciated. Best regards,
Dear Julia, Thank you very much for your prompt suggestion. Your continuous help would be highly appreciated. Best regards,
Dear Julia, Thank you very much for your prompt correction. Your suggestions are very helpful for me to improve my writing skill. Your continuous help would be highly appreciated. Best regards,
Dear Julia Vivian, Thank you very much for your correction and kind message! Yesterday, after I sent this writing, I noticed that I didn't answer to the question. Who told me this story was one of our teachers who used to be a newspaper editor;he is now planning to publish a book introducing funny incidents happened in the media industry. If he made it happened, I will have more interesting stories to tell. I'm always encouraged by your comments. Best regards, Ayako Nara
Dear Julia Vivian, Thank you very much for your correction and the grammatical tip! I didn't know that "or" cannot be put at the beginning of the sentence. I heard a different version of the test. The owner didn't believe that people could be good minded, so his question was like, "If you have a whole cake, which do you think would be more tasty, eating it by yourself or eating it with multiple people?" He had never hired people who would eat it with someone. Being betrayed by workers selected by himself, the owner finally knew that his decision was wrong. Again, I really really appreciate your help as always! Best regards, Ayako Nara (Mis., by the way)
Thanks Julia! Yes, 'a two-faced convenience' is the key point of my sentence. I was not confident about this expression, so I appreciate to your feedback. It's very helpful for me. Please keep safe always and see you soon!
Dear Julia Vivian, Thank you very much for your correction and kind message! I'm encouraged everytime. On the tanabata day, kids write a wish on a piece of paper and hung it on a young bamboo tree; we are told that the couple would make your wish come true. Tanabata was imported from China almost one thousand years ago, but it has become a totally different story from the original one. Someone in Japan changed it to an educational story. I really appreciate your help everyday! Best regards, Ayako Nara
Dear Julia - Many thanks for your amendment. I have just finished to retype it in order to understand well. Thanks again, - Noboru
