Dear Julia Vivian Thank you for checking my essay. I'm very grateful to hear your comments and advice. I'll try not to start sentences with conjunctions such as 'but' or 'and'. Best regards, gemini65516
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Dear Julia Vivian Thank you for your detailed feedback as always. I can't notice my small grammatical mistakes by myself, so It's very helpful. I also appreciate your warm words. Thank you so much. Best wishes, Yuki
Dear Julia Vivian, Thank you very much for your correction and message! Since perverts don't want to be caught, they target girls who look shy and quiet, who would never scream or spank the molester. They know I would. I really appreciate your help as always. I wish you have a wonderful weekend. Best regards, Ayako Nara
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Hi, Jullia Vivian Thank you for reading my text and kind response. Your feedback always motivates me a lot. I hope to work with you soon. Please stay safe. Best wishes, Yuki
Thank you for your attentive corrections. I think that the violent scenes of video games should not be seen by kids; however, we could not conclude easily as such scenes would accelerate the agressiveness of them. Best regards.
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Hi, Julia Vivian Thank you your quick feedback! I'm very happy to work with you again. Thanks to your detailed advice and corrections, I could write in English better. I recommend that you watch the movie. It is an American movie so I think it's already available in your area. Have a great week and please stay safe. Best wishes, Yuki
Dear Julia Vivian, Thank you very much for your correction! Have you ever tried to use this method to control yourself? At first, I thought it was great that we could deceive both our own brains and feelings. Then I found out that it was very difficult to think "I did it very well," instead of "I'm tired." My heart doesn't allow me to think what is not true. I appreciate your help and kind message as always. Best regards, Ayako Nara
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