I understood my mistake. Next time I want to write more natural. Thank you very much.
Dear Leahook Thank you for checking my writing. I'm always pleased that you correct my writing. By the way, I'm happy to hear you enjoyed traveling in Japan. Those cities you visited are very popular in Japan. I live in the north of Japan. It has as many beautiful and popular sightseeing spots as the west of Japan. If you have a chance to visit Japan again, I recommend you travel more north. With best regards, Sisi
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Dear Mr. leahook, Thank you very much for your correction! Actually, I knew that 2018 is the World Cup year just after Japanese team lost the game. Although I was watching TV news, I thought that they were playing preliminary games. Maybe I need a vacation.. Anyway, now you must be very excited about the semi final held on Wednesday. Again, I really appreciate your help and message, it encouraged me a lot! Best regards, Ayako Nara
Thank you for your useful advice. I will make effort to be good at English.
Thank you, leahook.
Dear teacher leahook, Thank you for your kind explanation. Now I understand quite well. Have a wonderful weekend, too. Best regards, 25lask2
Thank you again for your kind support. Your correction helps me a lot. Yes, like you've mentioned I always surprise "How time flies!", too. Thank you and have a nice week.
Dear leahook, Thanks for revising my essay. Again, I was little surprised that I could write mostly correct English continuously. I felt I need much more practice, in order to be able to write perfect sentences. By the way, I'm happy to hear that you got very smart watch. Unfortunately, I cannot afford to purchase it because I'm a student right now:) Anyway, thank you very much, and I hope you would review my next essay again!! Best, Keigo
Dear leahook, Thanks for revising my essay. I was surprised that my sentences were mostly correct. Sometimes, I could succeed to write correct sentences but most of the time that's hard for me. It needs relatively long time to writing as well. Anyway, I will keep going to become being good at writing English. I could get more confidence in writing English than before. Thank you very much, and I hope you would revise my next essay again!! Best, Keigo
Thank you so much for your correction and advice. I often have difficulty with singular and plural things, so, your edit helps me a lot. Thank you and please have a nice day!
Dear leahook, I am sorry that I am late for reply. Thanks for revising my essay strictly. For the first sentence, I mean I was not a participant, but I was a host of the welcome party, so that I used the words 'for freshmen'. Therefore, I am sorry if you had misunderstood my meaning due to my poor writing skill. When I say having a party as a host, I usually use the words 'I hold a party', but if this expression is not much suitable, let me know, please. Anyway, thank you so much for accepting my request, I hope you would review my next essay again!!
Thank you again! Recently, I am too busy to keep my pace but will do my best.
Dear leahook, Thanks for revising my essay. I have visited Ueno Park this month to have cherry blossom viewing party. It was very beautiful. I like it, and daytime drink was also fine. Thank you so much, and I hope you would correct my next essay again. Best, Keigo
Dear leahook Thanks for revising my essay each time. I am sorry that I am late for replying. These days, I have been trying to decrease my minor mistakes in my writing, so please tell me strictly if I made some mistakes and used slightly wrong expression. I would also like to try to write as difficult sentences as native adult speakers usually do in reality, because I may go to study abroad in the U.S. this summer as a graduate student of Business Administration. Therefore, I must improve my writing skills as much as possible. If you would have some ideas regarding my objective, feel free to advice me, please. Thank you for your continuing cooperation. I hope you would correct my next essay again!! Best Regards, Keigo
