とてもわかりやすかったです！ これからも英作文を日常的に行おうと思いました！
Dear leahook, Thank you for your advice. I enjoyed it because it's concise and accurate. I have finished reviewing my essays. It took long time because I changed my job and was busy. It's getting hot, so take care of yourself. Regards, Naka
Dear Mr. leahook, Thank you for your correction and explanation. Although I wrote "I never over eat" in this assignment, to be honest, I sometimes eat too much. I totally agree with you that "Whenever I feel down, sad, stressed or upset then this is the time I give up and eat unhealthy food." I like this phrase:) I will try next assignment and send you. Best Wishes, Yoko
Dear Teacher leahook, Thanks very much for your correction and kind words. By the way, I frequently go to my favourite cafes in my free time. Other than that, I like listening to music. My recent favourite is the Smiths and the Kinks. I'm happy if I have a chance to hear about your hobbies. Please have a lovely day. Miho
Dear Teacher leahook, Nice to meet you, too! Thank you for your correction and message. Your kind words have encouraged me greatly. I'm looking forward to seeing you on here again soon. Please have a lovely day! Miho
Thank you for your comment. I'll try my best not to make the same mistake you indicate in the future.
Dear Mr. leahook, Thank you for your correction and many examples with the word "charge." They are so helpful that I can improve my English ability. I am relaxing myself this weekend. I will be charged full of energy next Monday. I hope you have a great weekend relaxing too. Best Wishes, Yoko
Dear Mr.leahook, Thank you for your correction and explanation. They are very helpful. I will review and apply them. I am glad you encouraged me. Have a great week ahead. Best Wishes, Yoko
51歳で英作文を勉強し始めたのだがほとんど効果がない。書き終えて提出しても3週間位するとほとんど頭の中に残らない。 ただIDIY様に英作文を見てもらう前に名詞の単数形、複数形、冠詞の有無の使い分けが80%位しか自信が無かったのが5分や10分考え込んだり参考書を調べれば93%位は確信が持てるようになった。 また何もしないともっと英作文がひどくなってしまうと思われのでこれからも細く長く学んでいきたい。
Thank you for your correction. I'm interested in UK culture, so I want to study there someday. Have a good day.
Thank you for your kind correction !
Dear leahook, Thank you for your help. I learned usage of conjunction. That helps a lot. I hope you are having wonderful weekend. Regards, Naka
Thank you for your advice. I have just finished 30-day essays. Now I started revising. I enjoyed IDIY. It's true that articles are difficult for me.
Hello leahook, Thank you for the comments. I'm afraid I mistakenly used a Japanese-English word: "Major leaguer".
初めての投稿で久しぶりの英作文。どんな添削、コメントが返ってくるかと思っておりましたが、とても丁寧で、私の文意を変えることなく、ナチュラルな英文に直してくださいました。次回への意欲も引き出してくださるコメントに感激です。引き続き英作文頑張って参ります。
