Thank you for your correction and message.
I am very glad to see your evaluation. I have been often advised to write natural sentences, but It is difficult for me to do so. So, I am happy to read your comment. Thank you!
ここまで褒めていただけるとは思わず非常に嬉しく思います。また、センテンス毎に訂正箇所や解説を提示して下さるので、とても勉強になりますし、じっくり見ていただいたんだな、と実感できました。
more naturalになるように直した、というのは、直さなくても間違ってはいないと捉えて良いのか迷います。
Thank you for your prompt response! I appreciate your kind advices and your advices motivate me. I try to improve my English skills more and more!
Dear leahook, Thank you for your correction. It is very helpful. I feel the picture description is interesting. I will try it next time. It is a rainy and dull day in Japan as well. Have a great week ahead. Take care. Best, Yoko
Dear Mr. leahook, Thank you for your correction. They are very helpful. I totally agree with you that It is always difficult to let mini-adults go but is also the right thing to do. Yes, it is raining now today as well. Maybe it will continue until next month. I will send you next assignment. Best, Yoko
Thanks for your correcting my sentence! Your massage also encourage me. Thanks! See you soon.
Dear leahook, Thank you for your reply. Nagoya is actually a convenient and historical city and has a lot of things to see. However, as you wrote, there are many pachinko (gambling machine) parlors there. I think that it has pros and cons. Anyway, I would love to go to the Disney in Florida someday. I heard its hospitality is superior to that of Tokyo Disneyland. Have a great weekend ahead. Best, Yoko
Thank you for your feedback. I enjoyed reading your comments and advice. I would like you to correct my sentence.
Dear Mr. leahook, Thank you for your correction. It is always very helpful. You will spend the weekend on the south coast of England. That sounds great. I hope you have a great time! Best Wishes, Yoko
Dear Mr. leahook, Thank you for your correction and explanation. I am glad to hear that you have been to Tokyo and you know it very well. I totally agree with you that the Shibuya pedestrian crossing is unbelievable. Since you always send me interesting messages, I can enjoy reading it and improve my reading ability as well. I look forward to sending you next assignment. Best Wishes, Yoko
Thank you very much for your check and message. Yes, it is difficult to use (a, an, the) correctry. I will remember the usage I learned today.
Dear Mr. leahook, Thank you for your correction. I am very glad to hear that you have been to Japan and love it. Also, you know YAMAHA and other Japanese brands very well. I heard some sad news in London very recently. In Japan as well, dangerous incidents sometimes happen these days. It is troubled times, isn't it? Your correction is very helpful, so I will send you next assignment. Best Wishes, Yoko
Dear leahook, Thank you for your correction and message! Randserus are unique to Japan indeed, and they have special meanings for parents. Buying randoserus is something like a celebration. That's why they are so expensive, I suppose. I've been working for a department store and in the first year I happened to sell randoserus. I have been to a randoserus' factory also. I was impressed to see how they were made with great care. However, I remember that I didn't want to have a randoseru as a child, since I was scared of going to an elementary school. The randoseru looked so heavy and I felt pressured. Thank you as always and please have a lovely day. Miho
