Dear teacher Moss, Thank you very much for your attentive amendments. Your advices for my essay focusing on sentence structure is so helpful to review my writing. I will keep up to brush up my writing skill. Thank you very much again. Miduho
Dear Mr Moss, Thank you for your really helpful feedback as always! I always like reading your comments, because your writing has a variety of expressions sophisticated and very formal. I need to use English at work, so that kind of style is sometimes needed to be used.
Thank you very much! I could learn a lot of things from your comments. I also appreciate your drastic change as I requested because I could learn new expressions.
Thank you for your corrections and suggestions. Your explanation is very helpful to me because you explained the details of your suggestions. I really appreciate it!
Dear Mr Moss, Thank you very much for your wonderful advice! Your corrections and comments are always really sophisticated and literary. I learn a lot of things. Have a lovely day!
I didn't have much intention of adding a special effect to my writing, but, to my surprise, the past tense seemed to work well in the description of the photo. I want to use 'the historic present tense' with purpose next time, in a suitable situation. I always enjoy reading your explanations because there are plenty of grammatical knowledge, which is often new to me. Thank you for your careful work, and I hope to work with you again in future. Best Regards
Dear Mr. Moss, Thank you so much for your great help! I was again really impressed by your feedback! Your comments were very interesting, because there were a lot of new phrases and techniques. I learned "a rule of thumb"! Thank you again, and have a very nice day!
Dear Mr. Moss, Thank you for your really informative amendments and comments. I will check the tense when I write next time. Ryoko
Hello, teacher Mr. Moss, Thank you for your prompt return of my diary. Each amendment you gave me was quite useful, especially word choice. I didn't familiar with the word "flagrantly", so I will add this word to my notebook. Again, thank you. Best regards, Ryoko
Thank you very much for your corrections!
Dear Mr Moss, I was impressed by your feedback! I learned a lot of things that I haven't understood until I read your explanations. Thank you so much for the corrections! Have a great weekend!
Dear Teacher Moss, Thank you for your polite and kind corrections! I am surprised, amazed, and moved! I cannot write freely what I want to say. However, you read between the lines, and write them with polite way, instead of me. I learned many new things from your corrections. I want to be able to write natural formal English, so I will read your correction again and absorb them. I am very happy. Best regard, Misa
Thank you for your kind review. I would like to continue improving my English.
Thank you for your correction and some examples. These texts helped me to understand.
Thank you very much for your corrections and advice!
