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Hello Moss How are you doing. It's nice to see you again. I took a 6 month-break, just being relaxed. Thank you for the corrections and the detailed explanations attached. In the 5th sentence, you introduced a new word, "endearing". Also, "discourage endearing feelings". The word, "discourage" is followed by a noun. Meaning : to make something become less likely to happen. In the 6th sentence, Your amendment, "saying it would be the key to his development in terms of resourcefulness." sounds better and easier to understand. I also like this sentence very much, "Her son, no doubt, exceeded her expectations in this regard." You gave me several interesting choices of words "in terms of " ," in this regard " and "no doubt". I would like to use them sometime. They sound good and they are useful words when I make a sentence. Hope to see you soon. Yoko
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Hello, Moss. Thank you so much. You always write me explanations on the comment box. They are very interesting and off course they help me to understand. Especially this time, "according to the report" and "reportedly" I thought they are same meaning, but they are not. I will use them differently. "enhance people's well-being" "instill" Those are interesting. See you. Yoko
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Hello, Moss. Your sentences teach me a lot. I like the sentence you wrote replacing my third sentence. "At the outset of the crisis, the people of Japan were fortunate in this regard." "at the outset of..." sounds good, and "in this regard"is added to make the context clear. On the fourth sentence, "mitigate" perfectly matches the meaning I wanted to say. Also,I like your choice, "resorting...." "Our community spirit saw social commitment that we should be proud of." I tried to find appropriate meaning of the word "saw" in dictionaries. it must be a past form of "see". I guess most likely definition I found is "to notice, examine, or recognize someone or something by looking" Your story of your school teacher is interesting. As for Japanese language, there are also a formal way and an informal way. I think language sometimes represents speaker's background. I am a 62 year-old woman and I am not young enough to use extreme casual expressions that teenagers love to use. Hopefully I want to use a decent English which fits me. Thank you so much. See you. Yoko
Thank you for your early and meaningful revision! Best regards.
Dear Mr Moss, Thank you for your advise. You are good at getting what I was going to say about overtime in Japan and I was happy that you seem to understand my point of view. It’s always challenging for me to express my opinion on today’s topic, and I’d like to keep writing as much as possible. I hope you’ll read my next essay soon. Thank you again. Best regards, guava56479
