Dear Teacher EigoPoint san Thank you for your corrections and reply to my question No.4. @I am very happy to have had business with you. @the next section of the sentence, while grammatically correct, sounds unnatural and forced. @ It sounds like you're trying way too hard to be nice to them. @ For the sake of sounding natural (while still being polite enough) I have removed the second part of the sentence. # I have never imagined that it sounds like trying an excessive way. #I see. Being polite enough is good enough. @About my contact details, due to an agreement with the company, I am not allowed to tell you now. @ By using reasoning wording like "due to", @then it is also obvious that you are talking about yourself as the subject due to context. # I understand. @When the situation changes, I will let you know. @muddled up. @First, "situations" is plural, but you are only really talking about one single "situation", @the article "the" is used since you're talking about a particular "situation" @which is present-progressive and so suggests something happening now, doesn't sound natural or work grammatically. @Instead, the phrasing is pretty much always "When the situation changes". @"informed" means that someone has already, in the past, acquired the information needed. # In this part, I have found a lot of new tips. A word "muddle up" is new, which means to put things in the wrong order. # I took "permitting" from "weather permitting." It was just my trying to say. #"informed" surprises me very much. The object to inform must be already acquired in the past. @that sounds like you need the client's permission to do so. @As such, the second part of this sentence has been removed. @Just saying "thank you" is more than enough and makes the most sense in this scenario. # A knowledge of this kind of implication is very helpful to me. @I wish you luck for the future. @The article "a" is not needed as it refers to a single thing. @"I wish you good business". However, this is still a strange and unnatural thing to say. @Instead, people will, and often do, wish people "luck" for the future. @ If you say "in" then it means that you will, at some point, in the future wish them luck, but not right now. @ wishing them luck now "for" (the benefit of) the future of their business. # I see. "a" is difficult for me to use correctly. I thought whenever I referred to a single thing,"a" was needed. #People in English spoken culture are supposed to wish "luck for the future" in this case. I see. \\\\\\\\\
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Thank you for your corrections and precise explanations! I'll review the mistaken parts a lot. I'm grateful to you.
Thank you for replying with encouraging comments. This lesson is a realistic one and I found it very useful. Tomoo
Dear Eigopoint, Thank you for your reply. I’m not sure what to make sentences sounding natural. Your advice is really helpful for me. I appreciate it. I hope you’ll read my next essay soon. Thank you again. Best regards, guava56479
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Dear Eigopoint Thank you for correcting English sentences with a natural flow. I try to maintain a feeling of gratitude whenever I do anything Sincerely, Bearmatsu
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Dear Eigopoint, Thank you for your advice with my essay. I completely agree with you that this situation just lending and selling kimono companies make profits from it. I hope it will be banned when my daughter graduates from an elementary school. I’m looking forward to seeing you soon. Thank you again. Best wishes, guava56479
Thank you so much for your correction. Yes, I agree with your opinion below. "A lot of the time people will be really determined to get stuff done on the weekend during the week, only to laze around when the weekend finally arrives." That's why I think writing my determination like this here helps me!
Thank you for your feedback and comments. Actually he loves to read the book. Hence he was excited when he found the song on YouTube.
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Dear Eigo Point, Thank you for your reply. I’m really happy that you seem to understand what I wanted to say. Your advice is very helpful and accurate for me. I’d like you to read my next essay soon. I really appreciate it. Thank you again. Best regards, guava56479
