

Hello again, TheDreamWarri, Thank you for the corrections on my writings. I agree with all your corrections and I like them. Especially, "apparently" that you change from "seemingly" I wrote is a great choice. I have three kids and two of them have already married, but, I only have one grandkid. I know they want to have more child. My daughter in law tries very hard to get pregnant, and she had miscarriages three times. I told her "you don't have to try any more, as I know how much you had suffered" I feel so sorry to her. take care and see you next time. Yoko

Thank you for correcting my English!

Thank you very much.

Teacher Thank you for corrections that are helpful to me. Best regards, 5971mak

Thank you for your feedback and encouraging comments as always!

Thank you for your helpful comment. I am looking forward to taking your lesson again.

Thank you for your feedback and encouraging comments as always!

Thank you for your helpful comment. I am looking forward to taking your lesson again.

Thank you for your review. I also appreciate you paraphrasing of my sentences.

Dear TheDreamWarri, Thank you as always for the corrections. I read your heart-warming comments, thank you. My husband was born and raised in Kyoto. He said he was jogging at the imperial palace garden built in 14th century when he was a school student. He doesn't want to visit shrines and temples to see national treasure art , but I think he understands the value of the old town and the culture. Take care and see you next time. Yoko

Thank you for checking and for giving me alternative expressions!

Dear TheDreamWarri, Thank you, I'm doing OK. Thank you for the corrections you made on my writing. Texting message is convenient and doesn't disturb receivers while they are busy doing something else. But sometimes I want to have a conversation with people, especially with my children, as hearing their voice I feel happy. Take care and see you next time. Yoko

Thank you for your feedback that helps me improve my sentences and engaging comments!

I appreciate your advice!

Thank you for your feedback.