There are still some poorly expressed parts of my entry, but I will review your suggestions carefully and improve my skills.
I was not able to put prepositions and commas. Thank you for pointing this out. I will review it thoroughly. The paraphrased sentences are also very helpful.
Thank you very much for correction. I was encouraged by your comments very much!
Thank you for your work!
Thank you very much for all the encouragement. I will review the mistakes carefully. Thank you for your continued support.
Thank you very much for reviewing my work.
Thank you for your work and sorry for this late reply.
Dear TheDreamWarri, Hello and good to see you. I've been doing well and I hope you are also well. Thank you for working for my entry. As you said, I'd like to keep practice so far. I hope you have the rest of the good weekend. Best regards, m-yoshiro
Thank you for your advice! Yes, I'll keep it up.
Thank you very much for revewing my works along with lots of encouraging comments.
TheDreamWarri, Thank you for all the teachings you have given me today. I have not been able to handle nouns well. I will review well. Thank you very much.
TheDreamWarri, Thank you for always correcting my diary entries. I also received a lot of encouragement. It is very encouraging. Thank you very much.
TheDreamWarri, Thank you very much for your careful guidance. I learned a lot about the use of prepositions. Thank you also for introducing many other expressions. Thank you very much.
TheDreamWarri, Thank you again for your many advices and paraphrased sentences. I will read them aloud and learn them. I look forward to your continued guidance.
The Dream Warri, Thank you very much for all the guidance you gave us today. I want to write sophisticated English. A lot of feedback is really appreciated. Thank you for your continued support.
