Thank you for your kind explanation. I can easily to understand the corrections.
Hello Mx. The DreamWarri, I appreciate your advice and the alternative sentences you suggested. Also, I enjoyed reading your comment regarding the picture of this exercise.
Thank you for your correction. That's very informative for me!
Thank you for your comments! Your message always cheers me up. I totally agree with your opinion about a delivery driver. In the pandemic, we remind how important a driver is. I enjoyed your comments and messages. I keep on learning English, so please study with me!
Thank you for your kind comments! And I'm very happy to hear your P.S. I appreciate not only the corrections but also suggestion of another way to write. Thank you!
Hi, Teacher TheDreamWarri It is great to meet you! Thank you for your review and suggestions. I’ve been in Vancouver 2 years and a half. Yes, I’m a student working on a Coop visa. And I started working at a Canadian company in July. That’s why I need to improve my English skills as quickly as I can. I agree with you that Canada is a great place for immigrants. Beautiful nature blesses me a lot. And ya, Recently I submitted my PR document as Common-law to stay here longer. I hope it will be accepted without any issues :) It’s super cool you are from Egypt. I had been there once and that experience strongly inspired me as a designer, artist and music lover. Especially the Abu Simbel temple was an awesomeness place ever in my life. And also I remember that insane high temperature and strong sunlight were killing me…. I love that movie “Bronson”. I became a big fan of Tom Hardy since I saw his crazy “ Bronson” acting. Can’t believe it was based on a real person! Anyways, thank you for your comments. It is beneficial to learn alternative ways to explain the same thing even if my sentence wasn’t that bad. I would like to learn English expressive style more to expand my vocabulary and critical way to describe my thoughts. However, it was my trial using this app and I had limited words number. I wish I could put detail more. (It was a nice to challenge though!) I would like to use this system again and hopefully, have your great advice :) Thank you again and have a lovely summertime. Best, Ayano
Thank you for checking. I've already learned many words by heart when I was a student, I can't remember them. I'm going to keep practice.
Dear TheDreamWarri, Hi, It's good to see you again! Thank you for your congratulation and the kind words for my cousin. As you said, Japanese people still hold weddings in a traditional way. From my perspective, it is almost common to combine traditional and western ways. If you attend these weddings, you will be able to enjoy them. Also thank you for working for my entry. I enjoyed reading your explanations. In addition, I learned new words for me from your alternatives. I hope to work with you again soon! Best wishes, M-yoshiro
Dear TheDreamWarri, Hi. It's great to see you again too! Thank you very much for your reply and working for my entry. It's please to give me your kind words too. As you said, I was afraid of lead the new coworker so as to make him a leader, but I found he is great! He could understand a background of the current project, and then, he gave me a hand to handle our project. I think there is no need to worry about it. Thank you a lot for giving me a lot of alternatives. I read aloud them to practice! I look forward to working with you again soon. Best wishes, M-yoshiro
Thank you very much for your careful correction. The paraphrased sentences are very helpful. I will continue to work hard!
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! When I was a little child, I also had some creatures such as fishes, turtles, insects, etc. Some died too soon because I couldn't take care of them enough. I also think it is very important for parents to teach the responsibility of taking care of pets to their children. Best regards.
I appreciate your explanation. Also, thank you for sharing with me your thought regarding matter of homeless. I completely agree with your thought, and of course I hope that this problem is solved as soon as possible with permanent measures. Have a nice weekend!
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the difference between "recover" and "heal." I will use each of them properly. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! The alternative sentences you showed are very useful for me. I learned many expressions such as "compelled to." I have some menthol which can relieve itchy bite, but they are for adults and may be too strong for my daughter's skin. This is why I used ice cube. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! I also like Japanese big robots' cartoons, and I used to watch them when I was a child. Maybe my daughter is much more interested in "Studio Ghibli" movies than robot ones. She is just two years old, so she can't understand the stories. Best regards.
