Dear Mr.TheDreamWarri, Thank you for correcting my paragraph. I occasionally talk about a traffic jam with people I know, so it is helpful. Thankfully, mint-chocolate
Dear TheDreamWarri, Good to see you again! I really appreciate to your help to my entry. As you said, I will keep practicing from now on too. I hope you would help me next time, and have a great day. Best regards, m-yoshiro
Thank you very much!
Dear Mr.TheDreamWarri, I really appreciate your correction, which is concise and easy to understand. I can use the phrases in the conversation soon. I would like to improve my conversation skill, rather than writing one. Your correction must work! Respectfully, mint-chocolate
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! The alternatives you showed are very useful for me. I like the phrase "a little angel." It's so cute. Best regards.
Thank you very much for the corrections as usual.
Thank you as always. Your correction is very helpful.
Thank you for the correction! I am glad that my short paragraph became more natural!
Thank you for the correction! I learned some of words that I know but I can't use well such as "pour over", "end up in", and "above". They sound more native-like expressions!
Thank you very much.
There are still some poorly expressed parts of my entry, but I will review your suggestions carefully and improve my skills.
I was not able to put prepositions and commas. Thank you for pointing this out. I will review it thoroughly. The paraphrased sentences are also very helpful.
Thank you very much for correction. I was encouraged by your comments very much!
Thank you for your work!
Thank you very much for all the encouragement. I will review the mistakes carefully. Thank you for your continued support.