I appreciate your advice. I'll make an effort to make my essay concise and to the point. Your comments were all helpful, and I'll try to make use of them in the next essay.
Thank you for correcting my diary. Your feedback was knowledgeable and beneficial. I realized I had been mixing up the usage of "which '' and "that" through your comment. I had thought those two were replaceable. I'll be careful not to make the same mistake again. I hope you'll check my essay again.
Thank you for correcting my essay. Your feedback was easy to follow and useful. I will follow your advice on how to properly structure an essay.
Thanks for really helpful and informative feedback!
Thank you so much for your kind and helpful advices.
It’s nice to meet you, teacher Shawn! It was great to have you as my first teacher for tryout. Your corrections are very informative and helpful. I have decided to continue to use IDIY! Thank you very much.
Thank you for the correction. I will continue practicing. I love this sentence “Like other household tasks, regardless of gender, cooking should be a shared responsibility.” It has a strong message.
Thank you for your feedback. Your comments were very helpful as it is still hard for me to write essays concisely.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! Previously, my daughter and I made a Christmas wreath, so she may think that a Christmas tree can also be made by ourselves. However, I will buy a Christmas tree instead of make one. Best regards.
Thank you for collecting and checking my English competition. Masa
Thank you for your helpful understandable explanations! Eriko
Dear TeacherShawn, I appreciate your time and error in reviewing my entry. I hope you have a great rest of the weekend. Best regards, m-yoshiro
Thank you for your explanations and suggestions. I look forward to taking your lesson again.
Dear TeacherShawn, Thank you for checking my entry. I have to look for a costume from now. I hope you have a great rest of the day. Best regards, m-yoshiro
Dear TeacherShawn, Thank you again for helping me. I want to keep watching episodes of The Snoopy Show! I hope you have a great day. Best regards, m-yoshiro
