Thank you for suggesting alternative ways of writing the sentences, it was very helpful!
Dear TeacherShawn, Thank you for giving me your feedback. The problem of baking bread is that I have to eat bread by myself and gain weight. I hope you have a great weekend too! Best regards, m-yoshiro
Dear TeacherShawn, Hi, thank you for checking my entry. I hope that I would be a scholarly man. Have a great rest of your day. Best regards, m-yoshiro
Dear TeacherShawn, Thank you for checking my entry! I had a great weekend :) I look forward to working with you again soon. Best regards, m-yoshiro
Dear TeacherShawn, Thank you for proofreading my assignment! I find your advice very helpful for my better writing skills. Reveiwing your revised sentences, I realized my sentences tend to be unnecessarily complex. This will be important points to be able to write more natural English. I hope you do not mind if I ask for your help again in the future. Thank you very much for your help! Sincerely, Hana
Thank you for the corrections and clear explanations. I have learned a lot from your comments and I will try even harder to write natural English. Thank you.
Dear TeacherShawn, I appreciate your advice! Have a nice weekend!
Dear TeacherShawn, Thank you for checking my entry and your comment. I also hope I learn about gender topics more. I hope you have a great weekend! Best regards, m-yoshiro
Dear TeacherShawn, Thank you for checking my entry. Yeah, I made a lot of problems. As I wrote, I already left work and I'm writing this message. I look forward to working with you soon. Best regards, m-yoshiro
Dear TeacherShawn, I'm curious about your hanami memories :) Thank you for working for my entry. I hope you have a great rest of the day. Best regards, m-yoshiro
Dear TeacherShawn, Thank you for working for my entry! It's warm like spring here today. I look forward to working with you again soon. Best regards, m-yoshiro
Dear TeacherShawn, I'm sorry for your situation, but I also couldn't eat Taiwanese cuisine last night because my favorite Taiwanese restaurant was closed then. Thank you for checking my entry! I hope you have a great weekend. Best regards, m-yoshiro
Dear TeacherShawn, I would be happy if the ex-colleague would be a beautiful female, but it was not :) Thank you for checking my entry again! I look forward to working with you again soon. Best regards, m-yoshiro
My apologies for the late reply. Thank you for your suggestions and explanations. Your feedback is really helpful. I look forward to taking your lesson again.
Dear TeacherShawn, You are also cool. Now I can understand the benefit to choose the local train. Thank you for working for my entry. I hope you have the good weekend. Best regards, m-yoshiro
