

Thank you for checking my script. All of suggestion and correctness are informative for me. I have to review them again. I misunderstood the meaning of "good at waiting". Does this mean "patient"? I have to study not only writing but English words.

日本語表現を深く理解した上で、英語でどう表すかを解説してくれ、とてもわかりやすいです。今後も添削をお願いしたいです。

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I really appreciate Teacher Shawn's feedback. The comments are very clear and helpful. I could learn a lot of things. I will try to rewrite (copy) the feedback so that I can write this kind of e-mail naturally next time. Thanks!

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