Hi again, Catherine! Sorry for being late to reply this. >"the opinion is correct of Japan." Very new to me about the idea of preposition. It is very difficult to choose but will try in the next chance! >elderly couples have a deep root for getting divorced After reading your advices, I found that I wanted to say "Elderly coules often have a deep-rooted conflict that cannot be easily resolved and resulting into divorce", that means the reason of divorce is different from that of young couples. (It is said number of elderly couples getting divorced is also increasing, but with the different background of young people) I couldn't successfully express my idea due to the limited short time at this time, but could receive your ideas and advices any way, thus, I'm happy about it. I will try with clearer mind and idea next time. Thank you very much! Asouka
Dear Catherine, Thank you for your kind corrections and explanations, especially, about my question. Beside my question, all of the sujested phrases were very beautiful and amazing for me! I was really moved with the phrases you made for me. Thank you very much! Looking forward to the next chance! Asouka * My English name is Asuka but since I used to learn French at university, and to pronounce my name correctly in French, I sometimes use this handlename "Asouka". As you now live in France, I may rather use this handlename, if you like.
Dear Teacher Catymcd Thank you for your quick work! I will ask you again soon Mari
As a non-native English speaker, one of the most difficult things when I write a sentence in English is how to use article appropriately. Thank you very much for your meaningful advice.
Thank you for your encouragement.
Thank you.
Dear Catherine, Thank you for your correction! I heard from my co-worker that the student who called the police had been hated by other classmates, everything he does makes people irritated. I remember that Buddha once said that there are five causes for one result. Anyway, the student who called the police is OK now and come to school everyday as usual. I really appreciate your help as always. Best regards, Ayako Nara
Dear Catymcd Thank you very much for revising my writing and giving me advice always! It was really useful and beneficial for me!! Best wishes, Amane
Dear Catymcd Thank you very much for revising my writing and giving me advice. It was really useful and beneficial for me!! Best wishes, Amane
Dear catymcd san Thank you for your amendment of my sentence. I have fun with this writing work! I will try to write continually. Thank you, Yoko
Dear Teacher Catymcd Thank you for your quick work and thoughtful corrections. I like your explanation because it is logical and easy to understand. I will choose you as my teacher again soon. Have a nice day Mari
Dear Teacher Catherine, Thank you for your correction and warm message as always. You always encouraged me Thanks and best regards, Hiroko
Dear catymcd, Thank you for the detailed corrections and explanations as always. Your answer is always swift, clear and detailed but simple that is really helpful. This time, I missed the article again. Preposition and article choice is a part of my issues than needs improvement. >Keeping dreams in the mind is important seeing my dreams became partly true. >Keeping dreams in my mind is as important as seeing my dreams become partly true. It seems your sentence is a little different from what I wanted to say. "Seeing that my dreams became partly come true, I realized keeping dreams (in my mind) is important (to make my ambition a reality)." Could you get my points now by this phrase? This time, I was a little disappointed since I failed to make myself understood. But will retry for the better English. Thank you very much! I envy your life in France, as well as your travelling life visiting many areas in the world! Have a good day. Asouka
Dear Catymcd san Thank you very much for reading my sentence! I could know the words "an old fashioned", and I'm happy to hear I am not alone. ;) I will try to keep writing English. I look forward to seeing you in IDIY! Best regards, Yoko
Thank you very much.
