Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned the phrase "lose one's appetite." I will use it in the next chance. According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the phrase "as well as this." I will use it instead of "additionally" in the future diary entries. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the difference between "go out" and "go away." I will use each of them properly. Our daughter has recovered, but I haven't yet :( Best regards.
Thank you for the corrections with the clear explanations as always. I like the significant change as that is the only way to fix my way of thinking and to make my English sound more natural.
Thank you so much for your correction and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned that "a fever" means "a high body temperature." I will use it properly in the future diary entries. Our daughter has gotten better and went to nursery school today :) Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 1st sentence, I learned the phrase "fond of." I will use it in the next chance. According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the difference between "a carpet" and "a mat." And what I wanted to mention in this sentence was "a mat" as you wrote. It is small and light, so even she can lift it up! Best regards.
Thank you for your feedback with useful explanations as always. I have been searching for this kind of information below for ages! Thank you very much. “As an uncountable noun used to describe a concept generally, an article (the) is not required. The verb "develop" is used in the present simple tense to describe factual information.”
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 3rd sentence, I learned the phrase "she didn't eat much of it." I will use this word order in the future diary entries. Best regards.
Dear Franky, Thank you very much for the feedback and all the praises, it's always good to receive them ! I like all the pointers to make my text sound more natural. I will never learn else where that I should say ''human race'' if I am using an article but ''humankind'' if I am not. Also I have been using ''scene'' and ''scenary'' interchangeably without any thought. ''A dozen kids'' was an interesting one. I thought dozen can be paired with ''of'' , but after you pointed out, I looked it up in the dictionary and understood that it could be paired with ''of'' if the dozen is plural, for example ''dozens of times''. In this case I was talking ablut twelve kids, so I should right ''a dozen kids''. I look forward to the next opportunity.
Thank you for your feedback in detail!
Thank you very much for your polite correction guidance, always.
Thank you for reviewing my essay. I learned so much from your explanation. Especially, I didn't notice my unnatural expression of conjunctinos. If there is another opportunity,I hope to get your advice again.
Thank you very much for your feedback in detail! I will go over again and again to get used to using these particular phrases you have suggested. Have a great afternoon.
Dear Franky Thank you for correcting my writing. I eat natto almost every day. If you're interested in it, please try it. Perhaps, it would be addictive. Have a nice day! With kind regards, Sisi
Franky san, Thank you very much for the corrections and your advice. It is extremely helpful. I hope you have a great afternoon. Regards, Maccas
Dear Franky Thank you for correcting my writing. Your advice is very helpful for me. I'll try to improve my English vocabularies and expressions from now on too. Daifuku tastes good, so I hope you'll like it! I always look forward to your checking my writings. Have a nice day! With kind regards, Sisi
