Thank you for your informative feedback. Your suggestions are absolutely helpful for my improvement! I will keep it up and hope you read my writing again. Thank you, Daisuke
Dear Ms Franky, Thank you very much for your kind feedback and a lot of advice! Have a nice day!
Dear Ms Franky, Thank you very much for your really helpful feedback! I understand how native speakers express what I wanted to say! Your alternative sentences were very helpful. Happy holidays!
Thank you so mach for your correct sentences. Your explain are easy to understand for me. So I will try again! Thanks,
Thank you for your feedback, a number of extra examples, and your time. "You have used some really good natural English in your writing" is very encouraging for me. Thank you.
Thank you for correcting my sentences especially about the articles. I think it is difficult to use the articles and prepositions. I will keep on mind to read a variety kind of sentences on the internet and hone my English skills more.
Thank you for your feedback!! I had a very good time with your feedback. I didn't know you would not use the word "but" at the beginning of the sentence in written English in grammatically speaking. I used well the word "make", but I'm going to add the word " create" in my dictionary. "Create" is a beautiful word, l think. I'll keep on writing in English from now on!!
Thank you so much your suggestion. I have learn a lot from your comment. Thank you. Have a nice weekend!
Thank you so much for your correction! It helped me a lot!!
