Thank you for the corrections with clear explanations. In the writing, I wanted to say that we cannot compare the two countries. Because Japan and Ireland have different working environment, so the premises are not the same. Apologies for the confusion.
Thank you for your valuable advice!
Hello! Thank you for your great support!
Thank you so much for your polite correction guidance.
Dear Sylvia, Thank you very much for your really helpful feedback as always! I understood very well how I could have expressed better and more naturally. Having read your detailed corrections and explanations, I learned many important techniques to write efficiently. I noted them all and I will use them in my future writing! I have had my jab. My arm was so painful for two days and I was a little tired too, but I am feeling great now. I hope that my second will be fine. Tres bon journee!
Thank you very much for your corrections and answer to my questions. Your explanations are helpful and easy to understand. I learned a lot. One of them is “ in contrast”. Thank you again.
Dear Sylvia, Thank you for your helpful advise! I will study how to use linking words, and also study about natural phrases. I look forward to submit my works!
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 3rd sentence, I learned the meanings of the phrases "after that" and "do not work." I will use them properly in the future diary entries. Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the new phrases "lap" and "grab hold of things." I will use them in the next chance. According to the 3rd sentence, I learned the difference between "to restart" and "to start again." I will use "to start again" in my diary entries. A few days ago, the rainy season has started in Japan, so the weather has not been good. I hope the rainy season will end soon! Best regards.
Dear Sylvia, Thank you very much for your really helpful feedback as always! I learned a lot of ideas about how to make my writing more natural, especially your suggestions of discourse markers were so helpful. They are very context-dependent, and it's very difficult for me to find one that is suitable. Tres bon weekend, et prends soin de toi :)
Thank you for correcting my essay! Your comments were very helpful! Particularly, I realized how important it is to learn the way English words are combined.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned that there was no need to put the article "a" before "less appetite." According to your message, I learned the phrase "on the mend." I will use it in the future diary entries! Now, she has been almost completely recovered :) Best regards.
Thank you so much for your corrections and explanations! According to the 2nd sentence, I learned the expression "a bit of a fever." I will use it in the next chance. I will use more modifying words and introductory phrases to make the meaning of my sentences clearer. By the way, I feel better now because I took enough rest on weekends. Best regards.
Thank you for your detailed explanation. I am delighted in learning new grammar thing. Look forward to contacting you again. Have a good day.
Thank you for your correction and kind advice. It is helpful for me. And I enjoy reading your message. Thank you again.
