

Dear Nicola, Thank you so much for your review on my composition. I have enjoyed learning natural explanations, different ways in writing, and grammar. I look forward to my next opportunity to seek your support. Kind regards, Okadasan

Thank you for your helpful corrections.

I wanted to write below as the present perfect tense. How should I write? However, after entering high school, I would have made a decision about my life little by little.

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Thank you for proofreading my writing. I learnt a lot of natural expression from your proposals of alternative sentences. I will try to use them in a next work. Thank you.

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Dear Nicola, Thank you so much for your kind review of my writing. Actually I erroneously chose a 'simply correction' rather than a 'correction with detailed explanation'. I wish I could have more explanations and suggestions from you, but never mind. I look forward to my next opportunity to seek your support soon. Thank you and kind regards, Okadasan

Thank you for your corrections I’m more interested in English!