

Dear CeeJay-san, Thank you very much for reviewing my work! Among the comments you provided, I found it particularly interesting that, in the context of the email I wrote, “if there are no problems” wasn’t quite appropriate. Also, while I tend to want to keep my writing as concise as possible when composing emails, your advice that formal emails should consist of complete sentences rather than fragments was very helpful. I look forward to reading your comments again. Best regards, Ton-chan

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki03

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki03

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki03

Dear CeeJay-san, Thank you very much for the feedback! I tend to repeat words unnecessarily all the time, so it was really helpful that you pointed those out. I’d like to keep practicing writing emails so I can write more concise messages. Thank you again for your comments. Best regards, Ton-chan

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki03

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki03

Dear CeeJay-san, Thank you very much for reviewing my email! I’m glad to hear that there weren’t any major mistakes. I’d like to ensure that I can confidently write emails on similar topics in the future. I look forward to reading your comments again. Best regards, Ton-chan

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki03

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki03

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki03

Thank you very much for correcting my sentences. Your explanations are clear and alternative sentences are helpful.

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki03

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki03

Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki03