Dear CeeJay-san, Thank you very much for today's proofreading! Once the goal of conveying necessary information is achieved, I find myself wanting to achieve the next goal: writing polite sentences that consider the reader's circumstances. I'd like to use the phrases you taught me in other compositions as well. Thank you very much! Best regards, Ton-chan
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. Specifically, I realized that I need to be careful with ambiguous expressions. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. Specifically, I have to be careful too direct expressions. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031
Dear CeeJay-san, Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm mainly practicing writing relatively formal business emails, but occasionally I also write casual emails to long-standing business partners. So, your alternative sentences are very helpful. I'd like to learn more phrases to use in casual emails as well. Best regards, Ton-chan
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031
Dear CeeJay-san, Thank you for your thoughtful corrections! Your feedback about my tendency to become verbose in my eagerness to convey every point was very helpful. I will continue to practice writing to ensure that I can communicate all necessary information concisely. Thank you again for your comments. Best regards, Ton-chan
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. Specifically, what my sentenses are choppy and repetitive are noted, and such as "disability" instead of "people with disabilities" was helpful. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki031
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki0313
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki0313
Dear CeeJay-san, Thank you for your corrections! The mistake pointed out as a comma splice was something I hadn't noticed. It is interesting to know that some of the sentences I wrote were not grammatically incorrect but sounded unnatural to native speakers. I also found it interesting that you provided examples in which you altered the phrasing slightly to avoid sounding generic or formulaic. I look forward to reading your comments again. Best regards, Ton-chan
Dear CeeJay, Thank you for your corrections. The various corrections and rephrasing are beneficial. I look forward to your corrections again in the next edition! Best regards, Hiroyuki0313
