Thank you for your correction.
I always appreciate your kind and careful check for my essay. I cheered up by your sincere massage. I will continue to make efforts to brush up my writing skill. I am sorry for submitting long essay. But I hope you to accept continuous offering my essay to you. See you again.
Your correction of "... that counts when it comes to feeling rich" is beautiful. Thank you!
Thank you for your great corrections and comments! They will be great help for me!
Dear Florianna, Thank you very much for your correction and edition on my original sentences. They were very clear and became good English, I could learn a lot. This excersice is not only English but also deep thinking, logical thinking as an adult. It's very educational. Thank you very much for your comment as well, yes, I agree. When I was a child, I believed I became an adult who know everything, or understand eveything even difficult matters...ha ha ha. But, now, I am 60 year old, and I know only a little ... Everyday is studying! learning!
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Dear Florianna, thank you very much for your very precise correction on my original sentences. They bacame more natural and smooth. I learned a lot from you. "Only a nominal chance" . Oh, I never think this way of saying! thank you very much. That's very English!! Regarding facebook, just after I submitted my essay, such a pity and tragic case was happened at the Facebook company in US. I didn't think the tragidy related to the privacy leaking case, however, facebook's reputation has been scarred again. Thank you again, Florianna!
I enjoyed reading your comments about my work. Encouraging correction!
Thank you for correcting my sentences. Your corrections are pretty clear!
Teacher florianna I appreciated your lovely words, which makes me happy.
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Dear Florianna, thank you very much for your very pricise and accurate edit on my try. I felt very much surtisfy and fully understand your edit and comment. When I read your corrected sentences, they are very smooth and natural. I am happy to see such good correction. I did not know the usage of "be told off", this is very new for me. Thank you very much. Thank you very much again and would like to talk to you again soon.
Thank you for your reply and kind explanation. I'll keep on studying English and send my work again!
Thank you very much for your excellent proofreading.
Thank you very much for your excellent proofreading.