Thank you for your comments and corrections! Your correction "leaking water" made the sentence lively.
Thank you for your correction and comments! They were really helpful to me as always!
Thank you for your correction and comments! The Scottish Deer Centre sounds really exciting place, too! I found many cool and beautiful animals in the park on its online site.
Thank you for your suggestions and comments! I'll try to make sentences more natural and readable. I hope you were able to get enough refreshing sleep... Sleeping is indispensable to a good life, I think. Please take good care of yourself!
Thank you for your correction and comments! They were really helpful to me as always. Taking time for returning this to me didn't cause any inconvenience to me, so do not worry about that. I hope you enjoyed the school reunion! It's great that the reunion was held even several decades after graduation!
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Hello teacher Florianna, Thank you for your correction. My colleague and I actually went to the supermarket it takes 3 minutes on foot from my office. I could not leave the office at fixed time due to the delay of report, I got away to the shopping mall, and later, I mailed a strict customer attaching the report I finally got. Then I could finish my work. I learned that it might be unclear to say "I devoted the waiting time for shopping at high-end supermarket".. maybe I'd better say "to go to", instead of "for shipping at". And thank you so much for your warm message! It encouraged me a lot. "evoke", "lively writing", "picturing"... Before sending stars to IDIY teachers, sometimes I was sad that I didn't have good words to describe how nice their corrections and suggestions were. I am very happy that you gave me new words that I wanted to know! Thank you again and see you again :) moet
Thank you for your correction and comments! I learned a lot from you this time, too. I just listened to 'the Aquarium' from Carnival of the Animals' on YouTube. It surely is a beautiful piece! I can't come up with good adjectives to express the piece, but I really like it!
Thank you for your correction and comments! I'm sure you can enjoy making Karaage, or a version of Karaage, at home. Soy sauce and sugar, and sometimes with garlic or ginger, is very common combination in Japan. I hope you like Karaage!
Thank you for your correction and comments! They were really helpful to me. The expression of 'small'/'some' 'happiness'/'happinesses' is especially interesting - I didn't know 'happiness' could be plural because my dictionary said 'happiness' was only uncountable.
Thank you for kind comments! In addition, I could learned the new word 'pertinent' from your writing.
Thank you for your correction and comments! It doesn't matter to me that your correction takes several days, so don't worry about that. The smell and taste of Natto don't bother me - of course I don't think it has a good smell - probably because I've eaten it since I was in an elementary school. However, my parents always say they didn't like the food when they were young, though they like Natto very much now. I recommend eating Natto with some miced vegetables if you have a chance to try Natto but the taste is too unique for you. In Japan, minced green onion, grated Japanese white raddish, chopped okra are good to eat with Natto, although the smell is hard to soften...
Thank you for your correction, answers and comments! They are really helpful to me as always. I would miss cooking if I didn't have chance to cook every day, as you said. It's lucky that I can enjoy meals that someone else cooks, but, I want to cook by myself at least sometimes, too. I hope you and your daughter can enjoy cooking together!
Thank you for your correction and comments! Fukubukuros are so popular in Japan so that many department stores get overcrowded on January 2nd and 3rd. Other shops also sell Fukubukuros, but those sold in department stores are outstandingly popular. Chrismas crackers sounds really an enjoyable event! It would be very exciting to wait for pulling one's cracker, imagining what would be the present!
Thank you for your warm compassion and true understanding to this woman. I believe you are so good daughter being gently dutiful to your mother. I wish to write sometimes more about this woman's life in future. Sending my greeting of consolation to your mother and thanks for you, kiyoko