Hi florianna, Thank you for your support. Now I must have to get skills to writing English naturally, and smoothly. I want to write more effective, and I want to get confidence to communicate to English speaker. So, I will write more and more. Nao
Thank you for your correction and comments! I learned a lot from you this time, too!
Thank you for your correction and comments! They were relly helpful to me, as always!
Thank you for your correction and comments! I've never tried baking nor eating angel cake, Madeira cake and Victoria Sponge; I think I seldom have an opportunity to see the cakes in Japan. I saw pictures of them on Google, and they look very delicious! I'd like to try both baking and eating them in the near future!
Thank you so much for your correction and gentle comments! As you said "I think, though,that perhaps you so vividly remember her that it felt you should use the present tense when thinking of her by name," I failed to use past tense though Kurumi passed away many years ago. My family and I really loved her. I'm really glad that you corrected my sentences because now I can explain about Kurumi more naturally to my friends in English!
Thank you for your comment and edtion. In Japan traffic rules are very strict. Even touching smart phones and looking at smart phones while driving are against the rule and ones who violate it is fined. I do not know about this in your country. I think the rule is strict in Japan because there are a lot of traffic accidents with smart phones while driving. See you.
Thank you for your correction and comments! I like your detailed comments every time and it doesn't matter for me that your returning comments takes for several days.
Thank you for your kind reply. I'm happy to read your message. I've learnt a lot from you. Thank you so much!
Dear florianna, Thank you so much for checking my writing. You returned this just on time, so it wasn't not inconvenient for me at all. I learned useful phrases and vocabulary as well from the correction and your comment. Best regards, Yukari0224
Thank you very much. I learned a lot from you!!
Thank you for your correction and comments! I really enjoyed your comments as always. I like the third sentence you corrected, with the expression of 'while enjoying a waffle in a café'. That's exactly fit for what I felt; My sister and I enjoyed both planning and waffles. I didn't know that Mother's Day is in March in the UK. Thank you for telling me the custom. It's great that you and your sisters go for lunch with your mother on around Mother's Day! Yes, today(5/13) was Mother's Day in Japan. My sister and I made lunch and a dessert and gave her the presents. She looked very happy and she said she liked the presents!
Thank you for your correction. I'm sorry for late reply. Your explanation was detailed and interesting. Thank you so much!!
Dear florianna, Thank you for your correction and very useful comments! It's also really helpful that you gave me various ways to express, including an informal way. I'll try to read many sentences using 'relation' or 'relationships' to understand the connotations, though I think I could catch the outlines of them by your answer.
Dear florianna, Thanks again for your correction and comments! It's fantastic that your daughter was invited to perform at Disneyland Paris! Only a few people can experience that, I think! The third sentence you corrected is exactly what I wanted to express; I like reading the Harry Potter novels, but I haven't watched all the movies nor bought many merchandises.
Dear, Florianna. Thank you very much for correcting my work. Not only hitch-hiking but also walking late at night is dangerous in Japan now. That's true, "Safety is paramount!" Best regards, Yoko
