Thank you for your feedback. Stating a complex idea simply is very difficult, so your advice is very helpful!
Dear MessageMentor Thank you for your correction. I would appreciate your detailed advice. I rewrote the corrected sentences in my notebook. My writing will improve to a higher level soon. I want to ask you again. goodmorning084
Thank you for your feedback, and I’m sorry my late reply. I was taking the New Year Holidays. Your comments helped me learn how to write an essay more vividly!
Dear MessageMentor, A Happy New Year! I appreciate your advice! Have a nice this year! Mashroom
Thank you for all your suggestions.
Dear MessageMentor, How are you doing this weekend? In Japan, it's very cold, but I am spending a peaceful time. Thanks to you, this exercise was very fruitful for me. Have a lovely weekend. Mashroom
Dear MessageMentor, I appreciate your advice! Have a nice weekend. Mashroom
My apologies for the late reply. Thank you for your explanations and suggestions. I learned a lot, and I look forward to taking your lesson again.
I appreciate you pointing out not only vocabulary and grammar but also sentence structure and writing tips.
Thank you for your kind comments! They boosted my confidence. I will keep studying English hard to become capable of composing essays in the literary style as you suggested.
Thank you for your detailed feedback. Choosing formal words and styles is still difficult for me, so your suggestions were very helpful. Thanks again!
